Teenager Poem

Take A Look

© Maria
Take a look at me
&
Tell me what you see
Do you see my forceful smile
The smile that hides so many secrets
or
Do you see the tears in my eyes
The eyes that once took into much evil

Do you see my heart
The heart that holds hurt & shame inside
or
Do you see my skin
The skin that holds scars of pain

Do you hide my secrets
Do you see the evil
Do you feel my hurt, my shame
or
Do you see my scars

So take a look
&
Tell me what you see

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Published: Aug 2008

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  • that is me exactly...very powerful and awesome poem

    leaanna Submitted Jun 2009
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  • Wow this poem is very touching. It brought tears into my eyes because no one knows who you really are with all these emotions covering it. This poem is just like me.

    Melisa Submitted Jun 2009
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  • This explains how I feel every day. I have had a hard time realizing how I really am feeling. This poem helped realize. thank you Maria

    Janu Submitted Aug 2012
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  • This is such a strong poem. It touched my heart. I know what it feels like to be in that situation. This poem helped me realize that I'm not in this alone.

    Summer, Ma. Submitted Sep 2012
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