Death of a Friend Poem

Its About Drunk Driving And Showing You Someone That Doesn't Drink Can Still Get Hurt

Mum I Listened

© Shannen Hoskins
Mum I listened to what you said,
You told me not to drink and drive so I had a coke instead.
I felt so happy to do something right,
I never drank, not even once that night.
I felt so proud mum, to not drink
But my others friends did, they didn’t stop to think.
The party finished late that night, I left alone.
I got into my car and started to make my way home.
I pulled out of the car park, but I didn’t see
I didn’t see my friend coming straight at me.
In a panic I slammed on my brakes.
My neck jolts, my body shakes.
I looked out of the window and I see my mate
I see the car coming and think it’s too late
I felt his car crash into mine
I was wishing it was all ok and it would be fine
I Survived And My Friend Did Too
This is just showing you
What drunk driving can do..

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Published: Jun 2007

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