Brother Poem

A cry of loss for a brother who gave so much

Thank You Brother

© Prisma Y. Hernandez
Thank you
You were their when I was sad
You were their when I was mad, thank you.

You touched my heart and told me not to cry,
Thatís one reason our love cannot die

You respected my decision
I respected youíre compassion

Tell me brother why where you so good to me?
I screamed at you about 300 times
You were trying to help me, help me not to die

Now I know you did it for my best
You are no longer here, you are finally put to rest

You canít leave me now that I need you the most
Brother where are you, my heart is about to burst.


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Published: Feb 2006

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  • This poem was really impressive for me. I really like this poem because I have a younger brother and I think this poem is all truth. God bless all siblings. Love your brothers.

    Khadija, Lahoire,Pakistan Submitted 3/25/2014
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