Father Death Poem

Death Of Father

I was inspired to write this poem after one of my closet friends, more like a sister lost her father when she was 6.


© Tia
Please hold me daddy
And don't let me go
cause I really miss
you daddy
more then
you know.

You said that you
would always be here
by my side, Daddy why
did you go?
How come you lied?

Mummy won't tell me
I see her cry real late
at night, She keeps
asking for you.
I cried today daddy so
I laid in your bed,
daddy what do they
mean when they say
that your dead.

I guess it's ok and you'll
tell me soon, I'm looking
out my window at your house
near the moon.


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Published: Jul 2008

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  • Your poem was lovely! I have saved this file for my son whom is only 3 lost his father last year! I am putting a box of memories together for my son and will include your poem in it!!! Thank you for your heart felt words.

    Margaret Submitted Oct 2010
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