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This poem was written by myself one night when I planned to commit suicide and found writing a letter too hard. I have obviously not gone through with it and now by submitting this poem originally meant for my family, I feel I can move on from that stage of my life.

How I Feel

©  Jaclyn
Sometimes I just wish, I could run away and hide.
No matter where I go though, these feelings stay inside.
How can I stay here & live each day a lie,
When all I want to do is close my eyes & die?
I see the pain I cause you, with every tear I shed.
I plead with you now mum, let me go instead?
I wish I could take you with me, to a happy place,
Whether it exists though, is time for me to face.
Can I ask for your forgiveness? For you to set me free,
It may seem ungrateful, but this life's not meant for me.
Thank you for all your love, for all the time we shared,
It means the world to me, to know that someone cared.
How I Feel by Jaclyn @FamilyFriendPoems

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Published: 6/24/2007

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Well at the moment I'm thanking god you didn't go through with it because you are an extremely promising writer! That was amazing. Well done.

lalala Posted on Sunday, October 12, 2008

I'm actually crying.....

Lula Posted on Thursday, November 13, 2008

omg so so sad!
I've felt this way before...always attempt but never can do

marissa Posted on Wednesday, December 03, 2008

Wow, this is amazing!! I mean it. it really opened my eyes to what people are going through everyday. sometimes I feel the same way...I know to watch out for everyone to see if everything is OK. I'm glad you didn't go through with hurting yourself and all the people that REALLY DO CARE:)

Adrienne Posted on Thursday, December 04, 2008

I know how you feel. I've felt this way before. This was an incredible poem! Incredible, truly!
Thank you for sharing and God bless you.

GiGi Posted on Tuesday, December 16, 2008

I know people probably say this a lot but I know how you feel. Suicide is something I often think about. No one in my life really cared about me. I'm the outcast of my whole family. But as they saw how close to death I was they showed me. people do care if you let them into your life and tell them whatever is on your mind.
so thank you for sharing.

Larenda Posted on Tuesday, February 03, 2009

This really touched me.. I have been to that point. I have been to the point of wanting to commit suicide and it is a scary place. I tried to write a letter like this once but I shredded it. To this day I think that the only reason I didn't go through with it was because I was scared I would fail and I would have to face everyone again. I was scared I would not even be able to succeed at suicide. I am glad I didn't though and I have given that part of my life to God. I have found joy in him and I am so happy I am still alive today and did not end my life. I am so glad that you did not go through with it and that you are moving on and putting this behind you. thanks for posting this it touched my heart

Emma Posted on Thursday, March 19, 2009

It's beautiful. I've been to that point too. But I'm so glad now that I didn't go through with it. Life is beautiful and so worth it, even though I learned that the hard way. Keep it up, you're an amazing writer.

Keisha Posted on Tuesday, July 14, 2009

This is actually how I feel right now...
I wanted to print this poem out and give it to my mom, but I'm scared that she will freak out and go insane. so I'm not going tooo...
But, like Emma said," I am scared I wouldn't be able to do it" that's my point to..
So thanks you. your an amazing writer.!!

Taylor Posted on Monday, October 26, 2009

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