Did you pass all the planets
Gaze at twinkling stars along the way
Maybe, entered a new galaxy
Softly, kissed by the sun's warm ray
in Home Poems
This structure is very special.
It means the world to me.
It began on a strong foundation,
A very secure place to be.
I enjoyed this poem about family! I was blessed to be raised by great parents.
Beautiful tribute to your mom! You were blessed with a strong mom who taught you values. Your words remind me of my mom. I miss her every day. It will be 1 year next month since she left us to go to her heavenly home. I carry her love with me, my values, and my love for God. Thank you for sharing!
Kenneth, I am so sorry for your loss, I know how difficult the loss of a mother is. How blessed your mom was to be surrounded by her family, and to reach out to each one! Reading your words reminds me so much of my mom and her journey. Knowing my poem has helped you is the greatest compliment I could receive. Thank you.
Yes, Brandy, you may share and read my poem at your dear mom's funeral. I am so sorry for your loss. It is very difficult and painful to lose your mom. I miss my mom every day. She will be gone 9 months on the 16th. Stay strong. Your mom will always be with you.
Thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to let me know it touched your heart. Hearing from other readers is heartwarming to me.
Thank you! I have been blessed with many wonderful memories.