Rachael Knoop,
You sound like the most mature 15 year old ever. I was shocked after reading your comment when you said you were only 15. You have your head on your shoulders. You are very understanding of life at such a young age. God has given that gift to you to help you appreciate the blessings you have so you won't miss them longing for what you have lost. Stay that way and you will do well and go far in life. Your brother in heaven must be so very proud of his little sister.
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I understand. I have feelings I can't express. I just wish that I could muster up enough courage to share them. I email him but he just makes fun of what I say. I can't just say I adore you. This is a really good poem and is really heartfelt. Well done 10/10.
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I know how you feel. I love someone who moved away from me, and now I haven't seen him for over 2 years. What hurts is that he doesn't know that I love him. He is so handsome and decent. I cry for him inside all the time. Outside, I am happy and look like I haven't got a worry in the world. I've tried to forget, but it is so difficult, and I can't do it. I have found someone else, but he doesn't match up. I just wish my old one was back and everything could go back to what it is was like. We were so close. Everyone must remember though that the Lord will see us all through, so if we trust him we do feel a lot better. This did work for me as I came closer to him after an incident.
Wonderful words beautifully expressed and written.
If only this could be taught in schools, the world would not be smitten
With monstrous acts of tragedy and destruction.
To be replaced with poems of love and life's instruction.
I feel the same stuff you do, except my mom doesn't do drugs and I'm not in foster car. I hope you and your siblings find the right fit for you. Stay positive, and remember to never give up.
I loved this poem. The list of things that should be given to our children to have an amazing journey through this life, it's all here! This poem contains so much wisdom! Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
This poem truly expresses how you feel about her. If I were her, I would believe in every word in that poem.
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