I'm sorry. I know how you feel. I think your poem and the emotions behind it are awesome. I wish I could write about my emotions of being sad and invisible like you did so people know how I feel.
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I read your story. It was full of pain. You are very strong. Stay blessed always.
Thank you very much, Amanda, for such an amazing poem. Sent this poem to my girlfriend on her birthday, and she really liked it. This was phenomenal. Thank you!!
This was written 7 years ago, and I'd love to hear how your relationship is with your mom today, now that you're no longer a teen.
Stacy, you may have written this 7 years ago, but I hope you are still here to read my message to you! You matter! The lives you touch will be changed forever if you leave ahead of time! Be blessed knowing that a stranger in Maryland is praying for you seven years after you wrote this!! Be well, live well, and love well!
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I'm alone too, and it's mostly my own fault. I hate it, but it's trust. Grasping for youth at 54 is not how it should be.
This poem made me cry because I understand it too well...
For those who are in LDR, this relationship is such a beautiful way to tell the world that loving someone in distance give us power to be stronger.
Thank you for this. It helps to know I am not alone.
I am feelings very lonely in this huge world. No tiny space for my emotions here. I am shrinking day by day. I pray to God every second to take me away from this painful world.
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