Ode To A Leaf
in Fall Poems
I once wore the deepest, emerald green
inside a cluster of plush, verdant leaves.
I bowed from an ancient, magnificent tree
and fluttered and danced in a warm spring breeze
in Fall Poems
I once wore the deepest, emerald green
inside a cluster of plush, verdant leaves.
I bowed from an ancient, magnificent tree
and fluttered and danced in a warm spring breeze
Beautifully written, as usual. I would definitely 'be grieved by your leaving'!
Love and very best wishes, Ann.
in Winter Poems
To awaken to a morning
where a chill pervades the air,
despite the brilliant dazzling sun
that blinds you with its glare.
She use to show up every weekend
And brighten up my day.
She'd blow me kisses and she'd talk to me
In such a loving way.
I can relate to this poem and the feelings I have for my rescued cat naked Elijah. Thank you for sharing, very well written.
in Aging Poems
Dear World,
I fear it's over!
It's time to go our separate ways.
Oh Pat, another brilliant poem! As always, you've said it all. Growing old is a pain...
Love and best wishes,
Ann
in Fear Poems
At first his knocks were timid
but his intentions were depraved.
I felt my darkest fears arising
as he grew more angry and half-crazed.
I am so, so sorry to hear of your recent trauma. Goodness life can be really tough at times, but you of all people don't deserve this. You bring so much pleasure to others with your...
Dear Elizabeth,
Growing up in New Jersey, I have always had easy access to the ocean. I love the ocean but, I have always been interested in the beauty of the PACNW. I love to look at films that take place there and pictures of that area. I am truly honored and thrilled that your daughter has chosen my poem about the ocean to recite at her School Festival next month. Please tell her how much it means to me to have her pay such a wonderful tribute to my words. I wish I could be there. Please tell her good luck from me and thank you so very much again.
Sincerely,
Pat F.
Dear Danielle,
Your words are so kind, and I want to sincerely thank you, not only for taking the time to read my poem, but to also write such a beautiful critique of it. I am immensely pleased that you could relate strongly to my words. I have struggled with depression my entire life, and it has indeed affected the quality of my life. I am so very, very sorry that you have endured this pain as well. Just don't ever give up because the depth of your pain is what makes you a special person. You will be a more compassionate, understanding, and nonjudgmental person because of what you have been through. God uses people like us to help others, and that's a special thing. I was a psychiatric social worker for 36 years, and I was blessed every day. You are actually an extremely special human being, and although life is harder for people like us, we have an important place in this world that only we can fill. Thank you so very much; your words meant the world to me. Sincerely. Pat F.
Diane, I so feel your pain. I still struggle myself with depression, and my writing has helped me feel some relief. I am so touched and pleased that my words could help and show you that you are definitely not alone. Don't be down on yourself about your suffering becasue depression is a legitimate illness, it is not your fault. I always say to judgemental people, "Do you really think that we want to feel this way. Don't you think we would give anything to conquer this? It just makes life a greater struggle." But I also believe that our own suffering makes us more substantial and compassionate human beings and that maybe God gave us this pain so we could help others. You can feel better, Diane, at your own pace, and if anyone has a problem with that, see ya! It is their loss. Please let me know how you are doing. Thank you for appreciating my work, it means a great deal to me! Your friend, Pat
Dear Sylvia,
You beautiful words were like a poem in themselves. I could not have said it better. You are wonderful!
My Dear Joshua,
You have touched me so deeply with your beyond kind words. I cannot tell you how much it means to me to know that my poems can make a difference in another person's life. I struggle every day with life and knowing the right thing to do and then having the courage to do it. I have lived 66 years and the one lesson I learned that I try to live by is to be kind and compassionate, even when the pressure is to be angry and judgmental. I was a social worker like your Mom for 36 years working with psychiatric patients, and those were the most important and rewarding years of my life. You sound like an incredible person, and I know that you will make a huge difference in this world and change many people's lives for the better, and how wonderful of you that you choose to live that way! I am so proud of you and honored that you took the time to read my poem and give me such support and love. You are wonderful!!!