Ode To A Leaf
in Fall Poems
I once wore the deepest, emerald green
inside a cluster of plush, verdant leaves.
I bowed from an ancient, magnificent tree
and fluttered and danced in a warm spring breeze
in Fall Poems
I once wore the deepest, emerald green
inside a cluster of plush, verdant leaves.
I bowed from an ancient, magnificent tree
and fluttered and danced in a warm spring breeze
Beautifully written, as usual. I would definitely 'be grieved by your leaving'!
Love and very best wishes, Ann.
in Winter Poems
To awaken to a morning
where a chill pervades the air,
despite the brilliant dazzling sun
that blinds you with its glare.
She use to show up every weekend
And brighten up my day.
She'd blow me kisses and she'd talk to me
In such a loving way.
I can relate to this poem and the feelings I have for my rescued cat naked Elijah. Thank you for sharing, very well written.
in Aging Poems
Dear World,
I fear it's over!
It's time to go our separate ways.
Oh Pat, another brilliant poem! As always, you've said it all. Growing old is a pain...
Love and best wishes,
Ann
in Fear Poems
At first his knocks were timid
but his intentions were depraved.
I felt my darkest fears arising
as he grew more angry and half-crazed.
I am so, so sorry to hear of your recent trauma. Goodness life can be really tough at times, but you of all people don't deserve this. You bring so much pleasure to others with your...
I worked in a psychiatric hospital for 36 years, and I often thought about how my patients were often treated like they weren't even human. It was frustrating for me to work with people who didn't care about the patients' feelings and seemed to forget that they were people just like us, with all the same needs. That's why I loved you're poem. It's really beautiful in its message, and I hope other people that read this learn from your insight into your patients. I bet you are a wonderful nurse in addition to being a great poet. I loved this.
Oh my goodness, this is the most beautiful poem I've ever read. The story you tell so perfectly through the rhythm and verse of your poem. It's so endearing and touching. I feel like I just read this lovely story about your father who sounds so much like mine was, and what a precious memory you shared with the rest of us. You carried us through your history and brought us full circle to the oak tree, which for me was symbolic of the strength and beauty of who your father was. I wish your son could have known him, but you sound much like your dad, so in a way he has. You are an extremely talented poet, and this is the first time I'm marking a poem as my favorite.
This poem made me cry, which to me, the mark of a good poem is if it evokes a deep feeling. I feel so very sad for this woman, and your words cut to the very core of her feelings of loss, loneliness, feeling nonexistent, feeling useless and unappreciated, and worst of all unloved. I never had children, and now I never will, and that gives me great sadness. But I think for a woman who bore children, loved them, guided them and raised them, making millions of sacrifices along the way, only to be deserted and forgotten by those children, would be a far greater hurt and pain. Loved this poem, even if it was sad. God bless that poor, sad, sweet mom.
Wow, what a beautiful poem. To feel that kind of love and then be able to express it in such a way that I actually felt warm inside reading it is amazing. You described your wife in such a way that I think it would be an honor to know her and you as well, for not being afraid to tell the world how you feel. I love the form of your poetry; it's new to me, and it's just lovely. Thank you.
Love this poem for many reasons. Its message hit home for me, and I love the positive spin you put on it because aging can be so depressing at times. I love the form of this poem; it's my favorite, and the rhythm of you words is perfect. It's so simplistic but carries a great deal of real, honest feeling. Lovely, lovely poem. Thank you!