Ode To A Leaf
in Fall Poems
I once wore the deepest, emerald green
inside a cluster of plush, verdant leaves.
I bowed from an ancient, magnificent tree
and fluttered and danced in a warm spring breeze
in Fall Poems
I once wore the deepest, emerald green
inside a cluster of plush, verdant leaves.
I bowed from an ancient, magnificent tree
and fluttered and danced in a warm spring breeze
Beautifully written, as usual. I would definitely 'be grieved by your leaving'!
Love and very best wishes, Ann.
in Winter Poems
To awaken to a morning
where a chill pervades the air,
despite the brilliant dazzling sun
that blinds you with its glare.
She use to show up every weekend
And brighten up my day.
She'd blow me kisses and she'd talk to me
In such a loving way.
I can relate to this poem and the feelings I have for my rescued cat naked Elijah. Thank you for sharing, very well written.
in Aging Poems
Dear World,
I fear it's over!
It's time to go our separate ways.
Oh Pat, another brilliant poem! As always, you've said it all. Growing old is a pain...
Love and best wishes,
Ann
in Fear Poems
At first his knocks were timid
but his intentions were depraved.
I felt my darkest fears arising
as he grew more angry and half-crazed.
I am so, so sorry to hear of your recent trauma. Goodness life can be really tough at times, but you of all people don't deserve this. You bring so much pleasure to others with your...
Dear Meryl,
Your words are beyond sweet. Knowing that my poems can mean that much to someone is just so heart warming and uplifting for me. I love the fact that we live so far from each other but we can share feelings that are so similar and make that connection. Thank you for taking the time to pay such a wonderful tribute to my words. It means far more than you know to me.
Pat F
Lisa,
I love this poem. I'm a big fan of rhyming poetry and your rhyme is spot on. I love the message and the easy, simple way that you convey it here. I bet someone could make a great song out of your words. They really lend themselves to music. Beautiful work. -Pat
Jacob,
I happened to read your poem and it was so weird because I wrote about the very same subject, Soulmates, just a few months ago. I honestly had not seen your poem until today. But I must tell you, your poem is so beautiful and much, much better than mine. I always say that writing poetry is a hobby for me. You represent what a true, heart and soul poet is capable of creating. This is just lovely! -Pat
Dear Lillian,
I am troubled by how many people have responded to this poem by describing how badly they feel. I have been depressed my whole life and tried many methods to feel better and while some have worked for a time, ultimately I'd fall again. But now that I'm older, I've realized that my knowing what pain really is made me a much more compassionate person. I worked as a social worker with the mentally ill and while I could often identify with a patient's feelings of sadness and be able to help them, other members of the Team had no clue and little sympathy. I believe in God and thought maybe I could help more than others. I was a social worker for 36 years and loved it. I believe maybe this life may never suit people like us but maybe it's because we are here to help other people which makes us very special. Know how special you are and reach out to others. Let them know you understand and it's not their fault, so many need that. You are a such a gift in God's eyes.
My Dear Malainse,
I am sobbing right now! Your words have both broke and filled my heart. Let me share with you, you have touched my life so much and lifted my spirits clear to the sky. I too suffer from depression and have been on a downward slide lately. I have been feeling so insignificant in this life. I felt like there was no reason for me to be here. Then you wrote me this message and suddenly you changed everything for me. I am so honored that my words could help you so much. You have given me such a gift and I wouldn't have received that much needed gift from you and your nephew would not have gotten the help he needed and wanted from YOU, if you had left us. Please, don't give up. Know that you made a difference in my life today and I have a feeling you are far more important than you realize. Please, stay with us, take each day by itself, it's OK to cry it out but always give yourself one more night, then one more day and the miracles will start appearing. Sincerely, Pat F.