Just Wait For The Sun

• by Losingmygrip
• 3 months ago

This poem is absolutely beautiful. I've deep down in the dumps lately and it is so hard to pull yourself out of it. it feels as though you're causing more pain for others by staying even though they always tell you it's the opposite. everything is so so hard, but i'll keep trying my hardest to wait for the sun. thank you for this.

• by Ciara Duddy
• 7 months ago

Hi Lisa, I am so happy I have stumbled across your poem. It is so beautiful and hopeful. I am planning to read it at an event on Sunday for World Suicide Prevention Day. Thanks, Ciara

• by Chavonne
• 8 months ago

Wow! This is an amazing poem! I love how the poem just flows and makes so much of sense. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. I know you posted this like 2 years ago but I hope you're doing well.

• by Margie Fe R. Abrinica, Philippines
• 2 years ago

What a wonderful poem, Lisa. It's true. There is sunshine waiting after the darkness appeared. And it wouldn't be so long and can't be forever alone. Rain comes all along. We know it won't last long too. You'll never be alone. There is family or your loved ones waiting on you. Wait for the sunshine. It will always come. I love your poems so much! Thank you for sharing.

• by Patricia A Fleming, Trenton
• 2 years ago

Lisa,
I love this poem. I'm a big fan of rhyming poetry and your rhyme is spot on. I love the message and the easy, simple way that you convey it here. I bet someone could make a great song out of your words. They really lend themselves to music. Beautiful work. -Pat

• by Marybeth
• 2 years ago

I loved your poem. It's a good reminder to just wait for the sun. Good days are coming. It's been a long year for all of us due to the virus, but we're coming through it in the United States, and if we just wait for the sun our time will come.

• by Pragati Upadhyay
• 2 years ago

It's so amazing that while reading this poem I felt like I was taken away by the lines to a world full of hopes, positivity that is waiting for me to uncover these beautiful presents. Thank you for this inspiring poem...waiting to read more from your magical box.

• by Byron
• 3 years ago

Thank you for this. It brought me to tears before I had even finished. And perhaps that was just what I needed.

• by MD AAMIR SUHAIL
• 3 years ago

Thank you Miss Lisa Marks for sharing your beautiful poem with us. A lot of people around the globe are slipping into depression amidst the lockdown, and the ones who were suffering from it for a long time are finding it worse, some to the extent that they are attempting suicide. Your optimistic poem gives us hope, and we put our faith in God, waiting for the sun and the sunshine to come.

• by Kirti Sonee
• 3 years ago

Hi Lisa, your poem just echoes today's world problem, and it gives hope to everyone. My son heard it and trying to learn it as he so wants to tell it to his friends and family (virtually). Thanks again for giving us hope through your hope.

• by Abhilasha Supe
• 4 years ago

Hey, you did a great job. I love this poem. Lisa, I really love your poem because we could all use a little hope right now. Tensions in each home are increasing being cooped up all day, and it feels like this is never-ending. But a day is going to come when this will be history. I love your poem. It's so wholesome.