Breaking Up Poem

Hi, I wrote this poem when my boyfriend of a year left me for another woman. This talks about how he took everything away from me that made me who I was. He broke my heart and took everything away that ever made me happy about myself.

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I fell in love with a man 5 years older, and because of all the opinions and comments, we broke up, but I still love him.

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I Lost It

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Published: August 2008

You took my fears away
And made them true.
You took my love away
And ripped my heart out, too.
You took my laughter away,
And my happiness, too,
And let all my sadness
And tears get through.
The rest of me that was left
Also left with you.
I lost myself
When I lost you.

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  • Neli Skyline by Neli Skyline
  • 1 year ago

I fell in love with a man 5 years older, and because of all the opinions and comments, we broke up, but I still love him.

  • Jayde by Jayde
  • 6 years ago

I fell in love with a guy 7 years older than me but we didn't go that far. He was so nice and generous I miss him so god damn much it isn't even funny!!! xo

  • Amanda Umthatha by Amanda Umthatha
  • 7 years ago

I fell in love with a men 20 years older than me he told me he loved me and I also loved him till the day he raped me and I was infected by HIV. I hate him and feel so lonely I haven't told any one about this.

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