I Miss You Poem

I don't know why I wrote this...It just came out of me...But..maybe...

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This makes me think about life. Why do people hate each other?

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Wrong Was Right All Along

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Published: February 2012

She HATES him,
With all her heart and all her soul.

He was hopeless,
He couldn't do anything right.

When she was in darkness, he offered her no light,
Instead he joined her.
When she was down, he didn't lift her up,
Instead he joined her.
When she cried, he didn't make her laugh,
Instead he joined her.
When she was wounded, he did not cure her,
Instead he joined her.

In the end she couldn't take it,
She told him to leave,
For once he did the right thing...
He left.

Watching the flowers fall to the ground,
She realized her mistake,
His love, after all, wasn't fake,
So she waited...and waited...

She LOVES him,
With all her heart and all her soul.

Looks like the things he did,
were right all along.

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  • Casper Malinowski by Casper Malinowski
  • 1 year ago

My heart broke in half when I read this. I miss you, angel.

  • Unknown by Unknown
  • 2 years ago

This makes me think about life. Why do people hate each other?

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