At first being 45 I didn't really think I was going to read a 7th graders work but to inspire you to not give up you said so I read. The first few sentences made me smile pure and relaxed thru until it was finished. It was a good wrote poem to be fair, thanks for that share!!
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I wish my dad understood what he has put me through. He treats me like this every 3 month and in the 4th month he want to see me and make sure I am ok. But I'm not telling him how I'm really doing because he don't really care about me or anything that goes on in my life.
That's just like mine, but not only does mine treat me like that he also acts like I'm not here. I've learned to live with the fact that he wants nothing to do with me. My mom has played every single role that she could and tried to be there for me when my dad wasn't there for me. I refuse to let him in my life because of the way that he treated me.
I know what it's like to suffer from Anxiety Attacks and Depression I've been put on meds to help me with it, but they don't seem to be working. I still get anxiety attacks and Depressive Episodes so much I fear I'm going insane.
Very moving. My father, brother and husband were in the armed forces, so this poem means a lot to me. Very best wishes, Ann.
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I know exactly how to relate to this poem I have depression too, and it is not the best experience it feels like you are in a hole you have no way of getting out. and it feels like you are going insane and mental
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It was a cold evening the night of November 10th in 2023, I received a terrifying text.
My 28-year-old son was dead. I shared my grief journey on social media for over a year, before the final stage of depression hit. Of all the past life experience and reading, studying and trying to understand human condition, grieving a child has been written about millions of times I ached for my son, emotionally, physically, mentality and spiritually. I never imagined I would ever lose a child, my baby boy. It's been over a year now and I found myself standing on the edge, ready to jump, but God held me. He always gave me what I needed. The neighbor child filled me with joy and love. I have so many memories of my son and found a reason to keep living for him.
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Thank you Ann for your comment. It means more as it is coming from someone who has such empathy on the subject matter. Kind regards. Alan.
Another beautiful poem - well done. Very best wishes, Ann.
For real... the moon is such an interesting and beautiful piece of nature in this universe. The moon brings us the ocean, and beauty to our planet. And you're right, there really isn't a much more spectacular site than a full moon, and not a lot of people appreciate mother nature now, in 2025.
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