I wanted a poem for a funeral to express my gratitude to those who might be there but not know what to say. To me this fit so well
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When my mom found out I had depression because I ended up hospitalized, she said stuff like this isn't you, you were always so happy. What people don't realize is that those who hurt the most often put on the biggest smile. We don't want people to feel any amount of what we feel, so we prioritize their happiness above all else. I'm so sorry for what you're going through. I wish I could tell you I've figured out how to cope with the crushing darkness. Unfortunately, I still battle with it myself. Even on my best days, it's there, lurking in the corner of my mind. Just know you're not alone, and many people like us go on day by day, just trying to survive.
I am so, so sorry to hear of your recent trauma. Goodness life can be really tough at times, but you of all people don't deserve this. You bring so much pleasure to others with your poetry.
Sending special love,
Ann x
you're so right this is the message i really needed to comfort my soul
This poem speaks to the core, a helpless girl continuously harassed and her story left untold. This speaks for many more people out there whose bodies have become a symbol sexuality where men want to insert control over them with threats of ending one's life! Shame that such crimes happen in an era we claim to be civilized.
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Thanks Peggy for reading and commenting. So glad you liked it!
Thank you Susan and Ann for your comments. I'm glad you guys enjoyed reading it.
I love your analysis above.
I could not quite get the meaning on my own.
A very nice poem describing friendship dynamics in general.
Nice work!
Wonderful poem.
I liked the repetition of "Cool it down" as the final line for each of the 5 Stanzas.
Nice work.
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