Carol,
That is a super poem, filled with honesty and truth.
I also enjoyed reading your responses to your interview questions.
Wonderful and inspirational poem!
God bless
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Abimbola,
That is a super poem.
It is important to encourage ourselves in the Lord, as David did.
We cannot always depend on others to do that for us!
Great work!
Fourcedow,
Great poem!
Loved the conversational format, and the honesty in asking God questions.
Wonderful work!
God bless
Abimbola,
That is a very honest poem, also containing powerful Truth about God.
Nice work!
Amanda,
Very nice poem and very nice sentiments.
Nice work!
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HOSwrites,
Great idea about a review button to press each evening.
Patricia,
I liked the paradox of the line, "the silence that surrounds me now is music to my ears."
The poem is so Hopeful and promising of needed refreshment through nature.
That is something I think we all need more of!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, and also for your responses to your interview below.
God bless.
"So you and your power can just leave me be.
I'm taking my life and setting it free."
(Last 2 lines of the poem)
Hello,
It is a good poem.
I just find the very last line (see at top) a bit confusing, as "taking my life" are common words to mean suicide.
Perhaps that is not the author's intent at all.
However, somehow, I wish the words read "I'm taking my life BACK" so that a positive meaning would be more clearly communicated.
God bless
Great comments, but just mentioning this was written by a grand daughter about her grand father.
God bless.
Great advice and conclusions, Patricia!
God bless you.
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