Look Outside

• by Joseph Pezza
• 3 years ago

I like this poem because it talks about how the outside won't be the same in a couple years because of pollution and I can relate to that because due to the virus we can't go outside and the outside probably won't be the same.

• by Britani Gohl
• 6 years ago

I'm a college student who found your poem almost 10 years later. I am using it for my literacy analysis paper for an Intro to Literature class! If you ever come back here, just know your poem is awesome and has been seen almost a decade later.

• by Yara
• 7 years ago

It's an amazing poem! I'm also an 11 year old kid, and I'm having difficulties writing a poem about pollution for my science project. Any tips?

• by Fatima
• 7 years ago

Amazing poem! I'm also a poet but not as good as you.

• by Aditya Vir, Delhi
• 9 years ago

That was a fantastic piece of art from a budding poet

• by Kanchan. S. Kambli
• 9 years ago

It is difficult to believe that 11 year old do care for environment. God bless all the children who care for their environment.

• by Manoranjan Kumar
• 10 years ago

I really want to salute you for your keen interest in nature and in its problems.

• by Arul Murugan.Tamilnadu
• 10 years ago

Honorable solute for the young poet

• by Amiya, India
• 10 years ago

I love it. This poem helped me a lot as I had to make a school project.

• by Hyd
• 10 years ago

Thanks for the beautiful poem ! I am using it for my speech

• by Dnyaneshwar Nikam
• 10 years ago

Really wonderful poem which motivates to think about environment

• by Ankita, India
• 11 years ago

Simple but strong. I need to address students of Classes 1 through 10 at my school about Peace and the Environment, and this is perfect as even the smaller kids will understand this. Now I can save the more difficult poems for an older audience.

• by Aparna . Rajan, Mumbai
• 11 years ago

Thanks for the beautiful poem ! I am using it for my speech.

• by Arvind, Mumbai Maharashtra
• 11 years ago

I just loved your poem it's very beautiful about the world. You are smaller then me then also you write such a nice poem...........;)

• by Gordon Jackson
• 12 years ago

Great write. Words that need to be paid attention to. Read "Stop to Think" for more like this.
We all need to do our part to save the Earth.
Nice Job for an 11 year old.

• by Chaitanya Mallik, Delhi
• 12 years ago

Nice, I'm going to use this for my formative assessment

• by London
• 12 years ago

Wowww!!!!
I just can't believe this poem is written by a boy/girl who is same year old as me.....
I am gonna recite this in our inter-house poem recitation competition .......
It is very beautiful.....I just love it.......:)

• by Joy Vradenburg
• 13 years ago

What a marvelous peace of work. It made me feel the pain and fear, and the love of the earth. This little girl is going to become a great writer someday, all I can really say is one word. Amazement.

• by Montayvia, Blytheville AR
• 13 years ago

I absolutely love this story. It's very touching to me because I love the outdoors. I'm really amazed that a little 11 year old did this. Great Job!!

• by Mbugua Kibera, Nairobi
• 13 years ago

It's very nice.
Is this really the work of an 11 year old kid??
It's powerful.

• by Fatimazahra, Morocco
• 13 years ago

I loved your work, I'm also a poet, but concerned with within the self
you did a great job keep the game up

• by Aniket Chowdhary
• 13 years ago

I like this poem very much. It is unbelievable that it is a work of 11 year. old.