Goodbye Love Poem

This is something I wrote while in my depression mode after my breakup. He broke up with me on a date. As I watched him walk away, my heart shattered and I felt so sick, so alone. I went home and cried for days, only to find out he broke up with me because he had to move away. A very tragic, sad, and true love poem for all of those who have felt my pain.

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You And Me


Published: February 2011

I held your hand for as long as I could,
but I grew weak as you pulled and pulled...
My heart broke when you walked away,
no one would ever understand my pain...
My tears fell for my broken heart
I feel like my life is falling apart...
As I stood there and watched you go,
I wanted to hold you and never let go...
But the time came when I realized you never felt this way,
I let you go (my heart) that day...
When I cry a part of it's for you,
you'll never be forgotten, my love is pure and true...
I understand it could never be,
it would've never worked (you and me)...
But remember this, I have loved you so,
no matter what, I'll never let go of the thought of us as one soul...
I'll dream of you every night,
pray and pray you'll come back to fight, for you and me...
But don't you see, it's just a dream,
silly me, it will never be (you and me)...
As I write this poem I hurt inside,
will it ever be my time?



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  • by Shubhada S. Kulkarni
  • 4 months ago

The poem is awesome. The feelings of the poet reached to reader. That's the biggest success of the poet.

  • by Jennifer Curtis Poet
  • 6 years ago

I read and re read and just sat in AWE!! Jennifer this poem touched me so deeply I have no words to describe how beautiful it is! Thank you from the bottom of my heart and soul, for sharing this!

  • by David Robinson, Alberta Canada
  • 1 year ago

This poem totally reminds me of my late girlfriend Jessica Dianne States who was taken at 11 years old. Sure people say it was puppy love, I was a kid what do I know?? But everyday I shed a waterfall in her memory.

  • by Leandra
  • 6 years ago

Its amazing how one poem can speak to so many people. My new Favorite!! thanks Jen!!

  • by Aj
  • 6 years ago

This is an amazing poem! I love it with all my heart! I for one can relate to it and the meaning inside. Lots of Love...

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