21. The Pink Summer Sphere
The chill, worming in
Shock, pleasure, bursting within
Summer tongue awakes
The chill, worming in
Shock, pleasure, bursting within
Summer tongue awakes
This haiku just makes me want to close my eyes and picture in my head a beautiful flower garden, swaying in the cool breeze on a hot summer day. It also gives me the chills!
Jayjay
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Cream, smooth as velvet
A taste, sweet as your first love
Cold and refreshing
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Fuzzy blushy skin
Bursting sweetness, hidden seed
Succulent nectar
This describes a high quality ripe peach exactly, and the deliciousness of a really sweet, succulent taste explosion, and the rapture of it all !
Sun-kissed berry drinks,
And forever twilight skies,
Summer drowns in pinks.
A swish of tail fins
Silver scales shining brightly
Down into the dark
The pitter patter
Sound of the heavenly rain
Raises novel hope
Your eyes are fire.
Their image burnt into my soul,
Scarred by beauty.
My best friend Wendy wrote a poem about our mutual friend, Lyndon, who died on September 25th 3 years ago. So sadly 1 year later, Wendy, my dearest and best friend, committed suicide. I have...
Analysis of Form and Technique
JANUARY
Delightful display
Snowdrops bow their pure white heads
To the sun's glory.
I love this poem sooooo much! Can't stop reading it. I am in love with the absolute perfect descriptions of each month...great job Paul.
I was in fire,
The room was dark and somber.
I sleep peacefully.
It is a good poem. I like it a lot. It is also narrated well.
Swaying leaves on trees,
warmer air, blooming flowers,
spring's finally here.
Your first line has 6 syllables, not 5.
Love is nature's threads
embroidered in children, stitch
by stitch by a mother.
I am over you.
Then my eyes meet yours once more,
and I fall in love.
I LOVE this poem! It feels good because I can relate!