I too was very touched by this poem. Lovely - well done. Best wishes, Ann.
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Like so many others, I have been really touched by this poem. I also agree with the author that writing can help you through difficult times. I wrote throughout my husband's illness and subsequent death, but have reached a stage now when the urge to write has gone. I'm not quite sure why...
I used this for my found poem in ELA. My theme was miniature golf, and every time I went, I was with my family, so when I found this poem, I was thrilled. I am a fifth grader who is 11 years old
Another great poem. I've had depression, but not quite as bad. However, it's great that you can write about it, as I'm sure it will connect with many people who know exactly what you are describing so well. Love and very best wishes, as always. Ann
Oh Pat, I just love your poetry. I am so damned old myself it's great to read a poem that sums up how I feel about my aged self. Keep writing! Love and very best wishes, Ann.
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I selected this poem to be read at my Oma´s(grandma´s) funeral, and was read by my cousin. The reason I picked it is because it fit perfectly and my Oma loved nature. Her funeral was on July 12th, 2024 and she passed away on September 20th, 2023.
Thank you - it's always so rewarding to receive friendly encouraging comments like yours. Very best wishes, Ann.
You do an excellent job of giving the reader just enough details to imagine the whole picture. Best wishes, J.C.E.
I really like the concept and brevity of this poem. Best wishes, J.C.E.
Thank you for your story. It encapsulates my experience of my relationship to my father and his legacy.
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