Abimbola,
What you described is what Jesus desires.
Not religion but Relationship.
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A great poem and I absolutely love the last line. It reminds me of my poem 'Endless Summer', we obviously have similar memories. Very best wishes, Ann.
My dad passed away yesterday and today has been busy with arrangements. The pastor doing the service asked if my brother, sister or I wanted to say anything. Nothing was said then, but I came upon your poem and I think I will try to recite it at the funeral. It's definitely not going to be easy, but your poem just really says it all. Thank you
I think you will find that there are many people who relate to this poem. I know that I do for one. Very best wishes, Ann.
Such a special poem. I always think writing about difficult times helps. A number of people will relate to your words. Beautifully written. Very best wishes, Ann
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What a lovely poem - truly moving. Very special. Best wishes, Ann.
Hurray! Another lovely poem from you. That has brightened my day. Please keep writing. With much love and very best wishes, Ann xxxx
This exact thing but with my biological father. Legit left me and my sister when I was 2!
Well done, Judy, your poems are always a pleasure to read. Very best wishes, Ann.
Another beautiful masterpiece "Wonder Mom". Don't stop writing. Thanks for sharing.
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