I actually heard of a situation similar to this by a close friend in her mid 80's now regarding her brother's death in the Korean war.
What was told her parents was much watered down from what happened.
My friend found the truth many years later through eye witness connections that witnessed his death.
He was brave. It is just that his parents were not told the horrible way he died.
My friend never told her parents, either.
Better off that way, I think.
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This poem is very thought provoking.
The poet (deceased) was a critical thinker.
Lovely to read that well known poem yet again. It makes me smile and also want to clap - it's such a great poem. Oh wow, imagine being like that - whilst I hide, Maya she does nothing but rise! Ann
This poem should be shouted from the rooftops. Oh for worldwide peace. We have enough problems with climate change, we do not need wars. Well done writing it Beryl. Best wishes, Ann.
Virginia, I was incredibly touched by your comments. It's so special when someone really appreciates what the death of a husband of nearly 60 years means. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Very best wishes, Ann.
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Thank you so much Peggy, I grateful for the teacher who got the class to write an anthology of verse. I still have the book of poems I wrote back them, have been writing poetry ever since... Beryl Edmonds
This is a truly beautiful and poignant poem. I'm so thankful for your ability to write through the pain and share such beautiful memories. I am sorry for your profound loss and wish you many blessings as you continue your journey.
I really relate to this poem and many of your other poems. I should love to know more about you and what started you on the path to becoming a poet. Perhaps you could fill in your bio on Family Friends? I should very much enjoy reading it. Very best wishes, Ann.
What a lovely comment, Abimbola. Your encouragement means a great deal to me. Thank you very much indeed.
Very best wishes, Ann.
You managed to paint a portrait of him, Ann, and it's a beautiful one. So are your other poems too. Their brevity, depth and your dexterity with different forms and styles are things I really admire.
Best wishes,
Abimbola.
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