Nice job, Sylvia!
Your topic is so crucial for true success in life.
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I love this poem it was one of the first ones I read as a child , and always reminds me of bedtime as a child in summer . I have shared it with my grandson
Judy,
I am so sorry for your loss.
Thanks so much for sharing this whole experience.
It is amazing, the whole experience you had with your husband at the cemetery.
It is as if The Lord was providing you ahead of time for future consolation.
My wedding was in 2016, and I had portions of that poem read at my wedding.
I will never regret doing that, as my.
beloved husband passed away 7 years later in 2023.
God bless you.
I can see it, feel it and hear it - you have created such a vivid picture. Thank you, Patricia, for yet another beautiful poem. Love and very best wishes, Ann.
Thank you Ann no need for religion God is love that's enough for me. xx
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I too was very touched by this poem. Lovely - well done. Best wishes, Ann.
Like so many others, I have been really touched by this poem. I also agree with the author that writing can help you through difficult times. I wrote throughout my husband's illness and subsequent death, but have reached a stage now when the urge to write has gone. I'm not quite sure why...
I used this for my found poem in ELA. My theme was miniature golf, and every time I went, I was with my family, so when I found this poem, I was thrilled. I am a fifth grader who is 11 years old
Another great poem. I've had depression, but not quite as bad. However, it's great that you can write about it, as I'm sure it will connect with many people who know exactly what you are describing so well. Love and very best wishes, as always. Ann
Oh Pat, I just love your poetry. I am so damned old myself it's great to read a poem that sums up how I feel about my aged self. Keep writing! Love and very best wishes, Ann.
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