I am so, so sorry to hear of your recent trauma. Goodness life can be really tough at times, but you of all people don't deserve this. You bring so much pleasure to others with your poetry.
Sending special love,
Ann x
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you're so right this is the message i really needed to comfort my soul
This poem speaks to the core, a helpless girl continuously harassed and her story left untold. This speaks for many more people out there whose bodies have become a symbol sexuality where men want to insert control over them with threats of ending one's life! Shame that such crimes happen in an era we claim to be civilized.
Thanks Peggy for reading and commenting. So glad you liked it!
Thank you Susan and Ann for your comments. I'm glad you guys enjoyed reading it.
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I can identify with the poem, as I once loved a man who was nothing but a lair and opportunist.
I might have gotten through the heartbreak but never gotten over the heartbreak and how I was foolish not to see through his fake love for me.
This is a great and heartfelt poem.
I love your analysis above.
I could not quite get the meaning on my own.
A very nice poem describing friendship dynamics in general.
Nice work!
Wonderful poem.
I liked the repetition of "Cool it down" as the final line for each of the 5 Stanzas.
Nice work.
That is a great little poem.
He is the Potter and we are the clay.
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