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What's Important In Life

I have been through hard times, I've struggled like everyone else to find contentment, peace and an understanding of what life is really about. I believe age has everything to do with finally knowing what life is really about which is who we are and not what we have.

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The True Meaning Of Life

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Published: July 2017

The Years have passed by,
In the blink of an eye,
Moments of sadness,
And joy have flown by.

People I loved,
Have come and have gone,
But the world never stopped,
And we all carried on.

Life wasn't easy,
And the struggles were there,
Filled with times that it mattered,
Times I just didn't care.

I stood on my own,
And I still found my way,
Through some nights filled with tears,
And the dawn of new days.

And now with old age,
It's become very clear,
Things I once found important,
Were not why I was here.

And how many things,
That I managed to buy,
Were never what made me,
Feel better inside.

And the worries and fears,
That plagued me each day,
In the end of it all,
Would just fade away.

But how much I reached out,
To others when needed,
Would be the true measure,
Of how I succeeded.

And how much I shared,
Of my soul and my heart,
Would ultimately be,
What set me apart.

And what's really important,
Is my opinion of me,
And whether or not,
I'm the best I can be.

And how much more kindness,
And love I can show,
Before the Lord tells me,
It's my time to go.

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  • Amelia by Amelia
  • 3 months ago

I really love this poem. Even though I'm only 13, it totally changed how I think about life and how I shouldn't care so much about what I look like or own or what people think of me. Thank you for writing this. I hope there's many more to come!

  • Biniam T. Bahta by Biniam T. Bahta
  • 1 week ago

Amelia, trust me, you've found an inspiration that will change the course of your life. Always strive to be the fullest you, nothing more, nothing less. Life is always all about you becoming the you you were meant to be.

  • Sylvia Mendez by Sylvia Mendez
  • 3 months ago

Thank you for sharing. That is absolutely BEAUTIFUL. It was very well-written. I'm going to share this with my family & friends. Keep writing - I'd love to see more. Thanks again for sharing your poem.

  • Cindi Liechty by Cindi Liechty
  • 6 months ago

That's my girl. Random place and I see you here. Much love. Always a delight to read what you write. 20 years we've grown strong as friends. Love, Jello

  • Aashi Sinha by Aashi Sinha
  • 7 months ago

This was one of the most heart-touching poems, and I keenly felt its words, and its meaning was clear out. Loved it and smiled at last.

  • Bijender by Bijender
  • 9 months ago

This is a nice poem, and I loved reading and understanding it. This give a true meaning that what we have doesn't matter; what matters is who we are. And one more point I would like to make is that we should live it fully and do good for the mankind whether it is short work or great work.

  • Jozef Greatorex by Jozef Greatorex
  • 1 year ago

This is a beautiful poem with an important message: You are not what you own, You are what you do with your short time on this earth.

  • Priya Rani by Priya Rani
  • 1 year ago

This one is so beautifully written. I loved it. It's never what we have but who we are. Thank you for this one!

  • Pema Nima Lhaden by Pema Nima Lhaden
  • 1 year ago

Hi, I am twelve-years-old, and I love writing poems. Your poem gave me some lessons and tips to write. You showed me that there has to be a meaningful moral or theme. Thank you so much for the help.

You are very sweet to read my poem and I am so pleased that you got so much out of it. That all the writer of a poem hopes for.

  • Hailey by Hailey
  • 1 year ago

I'm eleven, and I've been writing a song for music class. I've written many songs, but none are very meaningful. You poetry has given me an idea.

Well, I am extremely flattered and honored if my poem gave you an idea for your song. I would love it if you could send me a video of you singing it through my Facebook page. Who knows, maybe someday you'll be a famous song writer and if I'm still around, I can say one of my poems gave you an idea for a song once. How great. Good luck and keep me posted.

  • Leslie F. Checkley by Leslie F. Checkley
  • 1 year ago

My wife died in 2005 of cancer. With no friends and only sympathetic neighbours around me, I used poetry writing to help express my feelings.

  • Leslie F. Checkley by Leslie F. Checkley
  • 1 year ago

Perfectly true in every way. I will be 91 this week.

God bless you. I'm so glad that you can relate to my words. That's all I could ask for. You take care.

  • Miley Gomez by Miley Gomez
  • 1 year ago

Thank you very much for this poem. It's so beautiful, so touching, so true. I have chosen your poem to make a presentation, and I'm told to analyze it.

Thank you Miley. I'm so glad you like my poem, and please feel free to use it any way you need to.

  • Mohammad Ali Pirooz by Mohammad Ali Pirooz
  • 1 year ago

So touching to suddenly excite warm tears out of my eyes for the very truth meticulously expressed by dear Patricia A. Fleming in her poem!

Mr. Ali, your words have touched me to think that you could feel the words of my poem so deeply. You are so very kind to take the time to read my poem and be so kind in your critique.

  • Abu Zafar by Abu Zafar, Banglaesh
  • 1 year ago

This poem touched me very much. The subject matter of the poem seems to be true and natural. The poet has tried to put up an idea of the creator in a nice way, thus deserving appreciation. Wishing blessings from the Lord for the poet.

Mr. Zafur, your words are very kind, and I am so pleased that my poem touched you. I am a strong believer in God, and it is a wonderful feeling when you realize that life is that simple. Just love God and do your best to do the right thing and everything else will fall into place. I'm very thankful to you for taking the time to read my words. May God bless you as well.

  • Carmen Tomiuk by Carmen Tomiuk
  • 1 year ago

I couldn't have said it any better than Patricia Fleming. This is exactly how I feel. I've gone that route where I would buy things in the hope that I would feel better, however, it never really did help. I think we all have to look deep down inside ourselves and determine for ourselves what really matters. I, like Patricia, have cried many tears. I also came to the realization of what really mattered to me in my life. It took a lot of courage for me to make really big changes in my life at age 64. Patricia is right, what is really important is my opinion of me. It really doesn't matter what others think. Loving others and in turn being loved is important. Thank you so much, Patricia, for writing those words.

Thank you so much for your support and kind words. It means so much to me that you could relate to my words. You have made me feel very good.

This poem, The True Meaning of Life, is so true! It is beautifully written. The author surely has wisdom and experienced much in life to be able to pen her experiences into words that most any person can relate to. What a wonderful poem!

Patricia, I'm so pleased that you took the time to read my poem and could relate to it. Your words are so very kind, and I truly appreciate it.

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