Betrayed Friend Poem by Teens

Hi I'm Candice Jones and I have NEVER written a poem before. I guess this poem is about what I'm going though at the moment. All of my "friends" are stabbing me in the back and I just had to let my feelings out.

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I had a best friend in middle school. I was friends with her for three years until the 8th grade. I was dating someone at the time that I liked, and we were on and off for three years. In my...

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Say Goodbye

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Published: July 2011

You say you are my friend,
But you stab me in the back.
I sit here in my blood,
Wondering if you will ever come back.

And as I suffer,
The days go by.
I'm wondering what is this.
Why do I feel so dry?

We once used to be happy,
But now it's all disappeared.
This feeling of pressure
Is slowly getting near.

My suffering increases
As the days go by,
And I'm sitting here wondering
Why you said goodbye.

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  • Cece by Cece
  • 6 months ago

I actually had two best friends. We have been besties since 1st grade. Right now we're in 7th grade, and I'm no longer part of the crew. Last year we were separated and put into different classes. Both of them were in the same class and I was in another class. In their class they met another girl and kicked me out. We were best of friends, but now it's like I don't exist anymore. I try my best to distance myself because when I hang out with them I feel like a stranger.

  • Desiree by Desiree
  • 1 year ago

Hi, my name is Desiree. I'm in 8th grade and my ex-bestie is in 5th grade. There was this guy I was dating. My beastie had a phone and I didn't at that time, so she eventually took his number without my knowledge, so they started chatting. Then she was like, "You and my friend are not fit for each other." Then they started dating.

  • Alina Tayeng by Alina Tayeng
  • 4 years ago

I once had 2 best friends...Meyu and Aisu. One day, when I came to school, Kipi (my classmate) told me that Aisu was crying. Then I talked to her and made her smile and after that she had a fight with Meyu and then Aisu said that nobody was her best friend... she called us her best friend just for name-sake.... those words still make me sad..... I never became happy for real after that day

  • Aryanna Chlumsky by Aryanna Chlumsky
  • 1 year ago

I had a best friend in middle school. I was friends with her for three years until the 8th grade. I was dating someone at the time that I liked, and we were on and off for three years. In my eighth year I found out that she had been dating him behind my back while I was dating him. He was cheating on me the whole time. I gave him an ultimatum one day, and he walked off, so I knew who he really wanted. The next day I found them holding hands in the yard that we had recess in, and I had a breakdown.

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