Betrayed Friend Poem by Teens

Hi I'm Candice Jones and I have NEVER written a poem before. I guess this poem is about what I'm going though at the moment, all of my 'friends' are stabbing me in the back and I just had to let my feelings out.

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I had a best friend in middle school. I was friends with her for three years until the 8th grade. I was dating someone at the time that I liked, and we were on and off for three years. In my...

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Say Goodbye

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Published: July 2011

You say you are my friend
But you stab me in the back
I sit here in my blood
Wondering if you will ever come back

And as I suffer
The days go by
I'm wondering what is this
Why do I feel so dry?

We once used to be happy
But now it's all disappeared
This feeling of pressure
Is slowly getting near

My suffering increases
As the days go by
And I'm sitting here wondering
Why you said goodbye

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  • by Alina Tayeng
  • 3 years ago

I once had 2 best friends...Meyu and Aisu. One day, when I came to school, Kipi (my classmate) told me that Aisu was crying. Then I talked to her and made her smile and after that she had a fight with Meyu and then Aisu said that nobody was her best friend... she called us her best friend just for name-sake.... those words still make me sad..... I never became happy for real after that day

  • by Aryanna Chlumsky
  • 5 months ago

I had a best friend in middle school. I was friends with her for three years until the 8th grade. I was dating someone at the time that I liked, and we were on and off for three years. In my eighth year I found out that she had been dating him behind my back while I was dating him. He was cheating on me the whole time. I gave him an ultimatum one day, and he walked off, so I knew who he really wanted. The next day I found them holding hands in the yard that we had recess in, and I had a breakdown.

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