I tried so hard.
I tried my best.
I gave you my all,
And now there's nothing left.
You stole my heart
Then tore it in two.
Now I'm falling apart
And don't know what to do.
Divided by decisions,
Burned by the fire,
Confused by your words,
Tempted by desire.
I'm living in the present.
My mind is on the past.
Not knowing what I'll lose,
Not knowing what will last.
Blinded by fear,
Drowning in doubt,
Struggling to be free,
Looking for a way out.
So after getting over the guy I loved, I am in the same class with my boyfriend (on campus). He doubts me despite me trying hard to meet his expectations. I have tried to let him go, but I...
Analysis of Form and Technique
I Tried So Hard
Published: December 2009
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For Students - Analysis of Form and Technique
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Techniques this poem uses:
- This poem is made up of quatrains, which are 4 line stanzas.
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- This poem follows the ABCB rhyming pattern. The last word in lines two and four rhyme with each other.
Divided by decisions, A
burned by the fire. B
Confused by your words. C
Tempted by desire. BRead more about rhyme schemes - This poem is written with a lot of emotion, causing the reader to feel what the author feels.
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Hey! It's okay. Relax :)
I had suffered from this pain, and now I'm doing just fine. Don't lose yourself over a guy. He doesn't deserve you. Just remember that.