Girlfriend Poem

Poem Asking Permission To Love You

This is a poem to my beautiful girlfriend, Summer. From the beginning, I asked Summer if we could build a relationship the old fashioned way. This poem is my way of asking her permission to love her...

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Thanks. It's a masterpiece. I cried reading it because I can relate it to her.

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Would It Be Ok?

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Published: February 2016

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Would it be ok if I took on the part
Of being your man and showed you a view,
One that only a real man could do?
Would it be ok if I could make you smile?
Would it be ok if I held you awhile?
Would it be ok if I kissed your face?
Would it be ok if I were to replace
All the men in your past that just wouldn't do
And vow to be faithful and always be true?
Would it be alright to look in your eyes?
Would it be alright to never tell lies?
Would it be alright to find a way?
Would it be alright to long for the day
To pull you close and whisper in your ear
And tell you our feelings are nothing to fear?
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
To tell you there's nothing I'd rather do
Than spend my whole life loving only you...

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  • by Theguywhowroteforher
  • 1 month ago

Thanks. It's a masterpiece. I cried reading it because I can relate it to her.

  • by Nicholas Alexander Henry
  • 1 month ago

Sent this to my girlfriend and she said, "Yes, yes!" Thanks a lot.

  • by Tebogo-M
  • 2 months ago

This is the most adorable and breathtaking poem. I gave it to my girlfriend on her birthday. I wish I were creative like you.

  • by Sphesihle
  • 3 months ago

This is the most touching and greatest poem ever. After reading this to my crush she became the love of my life!

  • by Bunni
  • 5 months ago

I became his girlfriend right after he showed me this. He melted my heart sending this to me, and I am so happy he's in my life.

  • by Tommy Cole Tomlinson
  • 5 months ago

I sent this to my girlfriend. She said a thousand times yes to everything. She wants me to take as much time as I can handle. She wants me to be with her whenever possible. She wants me to write all these poems, send her poems, all the time telling her how I feel. This was an amazing poem. Thank you!

  • by Jayden Vancor
  • 6 months ago

There is this person I have a crush on. I am gonna give them this poem and see if they will let me come into their heart!

  • by Brianna May Cotterell
  • 6 months ago

My girlfriend sent this to me. It was the most adorable thing ever. Love you, Hallie!

  • by Mariam Lisa Del Valle
  • 10 months ago

My boyfriend is the sweetest man. He shows me his love in any way he can. I am so in love with him, and I will always love him. Until death do us part. I love you, handsome... always!

  • by Nikki Sherman
  • 1 year ago

My boyfriend sent this to me recently, and I just absolutely feel in love with not only the poem but also with him all over again. This is the most beautiful poem I've ever read.

  • by Theuns Victor
  • 1 year ago

A poem I can truly relate to. The poet touched a single spot in my heart. After having going through a second divorce in 3 years the fear of getting hurt again lies just below the surface. How do you tell a woman that you have feelings for her, that you have fallen for her without scaring her. The poet makes it easy by asking the questions and letting the girl answer. Truly a touching poem with far reaching effects for a new long term relationship.

Thank you for making it available.

  • by Alex Reynozo
  • 1 year ago

This is the best poem I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this great poem.

  • by Mar Small
  • 1 year ago

It was awesome how you put it. The format was great.

  • by Joey Boe
  • 4 months ago

The format he used was Anaphora. Anaphora is the deliberate repetition of the first part of the sentence in order to achieve an artistic effect.

  • by Swati
  • 1 year ago

Ryan I hope you and your girlfriend live hundreds of years. Most beautiful and loving poem I read till date... god bless you both..

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