Girlfriend Poem

Sweet Poem For Girlfriend

This is a poem to my beautiful girlfriend, Summer. From the beginning, I asked Summer if we could build a relationship the old fashioned way. This poem is my way of asking her permission to love her...

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It's a pleasure to lend you my time And even to create a rhyme I would love to open my heart Because I know you won't tear it apart. You're already my man and sure you do And that's what...

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Would It Be Ok?

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Published: February 2016

Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Would it be ok if I took on the part
Of being your man and showed you a view,
One that only a real man could do?
Would it be ok if I could make you smile?
Would it be ok if I held you awhile?
Would it be ok if I kissed your face?
Would it be ok if I were to replace
All the men in your past that just wouldn't do
And vow to be faithful and always be true?
Would it be alright to look in your eyes?
Would it be alright to never tell lies?
Would it be alright to find a way?
Would it be alright to long for the day
To pull you close and whisper in your ear
And tell you our feelings are nothing to fear?
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
To tell you there's nothing I'd rather do
Than spend my whole life loving only you...

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  • by Shem
  • 2 months ago

My wife sent me this beautiful poem during our long break. After reading and examining it carefully, we solved our differences and came together as one.

  • by Harsh Yadav
  • 5 months ago

It's a pleasure to lend you my time
And even to create a rhyme
I would love to open my heart
Because I know you won't tear it apart.
You're already my man and sure you do
And that's what a gentleman can do
You never fail to make me smile
And held me though we're apart for a thousand mile
Your kiss is all I miss
And you're not a replacement.
All those men in my past are just memories too,
But I'm thankful because you're always true.
It's totally fine to look me in the eyes
Because I know you never tell lies
Love, we will find a way
And I know we can make it through all day
Just pull me closer and whisper on my ears
With you by my side I have nothing to fear..

It's my girlfriend's reply to me on your poem. She is legendary.

  • by Pete
  • 6 months ago

Ryan, congratulations! You have written a true classic, a very, very beautiful poem that is up there with the greats.

  • by Abdirizak Abukar
  • 6 months ago

You’re my love. I want you. Every time I see you I don’t know what to say to you. You’re more important than money. I don’t know how you love me, but it’s funny. I want to be the one who calls you honey. I don’t want to leave you. You’re my love. I don’t usually write, but I could do anything for you. When I saw you, I just knew. When you leave me for a second, I cry. When I saw how beautiful you were, I knew I had to try. When you leave me I am not fine. I want you to be mine. Your love is the best, and I am glad that I am your first. I give you all of my trust.

  • by David Perkins
  • 7 months ago

I just sent this to my girlfriend. It's crazy. I was reading it, and I never thought I could feel the way I do right now for someone. Your poem is amazing. I'm waiting for my girlfriend's response. Hopefully it brings us closer together. Great poem. Amazing job! And thank you again.

  • by Cody
  • 8 months ago

I sent this to my wife in Japan. She told me it brought a smile to her face every time she read it, especially the times we are away from each other separated by an ocean from each other. I love you, Akiko.

  • by Chris Skelton
  • 9 months ago

This hits home very much. I got into a relationship not too long ago, and this is the perfect poem for what I have been wanting to say to her.

  • by Sumaya Jan
  • 9 months ago

It really touched my heart. If the same poem were sent to me by my husband, the answer to every line would be a big yes. Thanks for the wonderful poem. God bless you.

  • by Fred Kato
  • 9 months ago

Sent this to my girlfriend, and she called me and said I just shot her in the heart with a spear of love.

  • by Tsepo
  • 9 months ago

Wow, what a nice poem indeed. After I read this poem I then passed it to my girlfriend. She said she will love me forever.

  • by Theguywhowroteforher
  • 1 year ago

Thanks. It's a masterpiece. I cried reading it because I can relate it to her.

  • by Nicholas Alexander Henry
  • 1 year ago

Sent this to my girlfriend and she said, "Yes, yes!" Thanks a lot.

  • by Tebogo-M
  • 1 year ago

This is the most adorable and breathtaking poem. I gave it to my girlfriend on her birthday. I wish I were creative like you.

  • by Sphesihle
  • 1 year ago

This is the most touching and greatest poem ever. After reading this to my crush she became the love of my life!

  • by Bunni
  • 1 year ago

I became his girlfriend right after he showed me this. He melted my heart sending this to me, and I am so happy he's in my life.

  • by Tommy Cole Tomlinson
  • 1 year ago

I sent this to my girlfriend. She said a thousand times yes to everything. She wants me to take as much time as I can handle. She wants me to be with her whenever possible. She wants me to write all these poems, send her poems, all the time telling her how I feel. This was an amazing poem. Thank you!

  • by Jayden Vancor
  • 1 year ago

There is this person I have a crush on. I am gonna give them this poem and see if they will let me come into their heart!

  • by Dylan Sankar
  • 9 months ago

Hey, how did it go? Did she say yes? I want to do the same thing as well; I'm just too nervous and afraid of her saying no.

  • by Brianna May Cotterell
  • 1 year ago

My girlfriend sent this to me. It was the most adorable thing ever. Love you, Hallie!

  • by Mariam Lisa Del Valle
  • 1 year ago

My boyfriend is the sweetest man. He shows me his love in any way he can. I am so in love with him, and I will always love him. Until death do us part. I love you, handsome... always!

  • by Nikki Sherman
  • 2 years ago

My boyfriend sent this to me recently, and I just absolutely feel in love with not only the poem but also with him all over again. This is the most beautiful poem I've ever read.

  • by Theuns Victor
  • 2 years ago

A poem I can truly relate to. The poet touched a single spot in my heart. After having going through a second divorce in 3 years the fear of getting hurt again lies just below the surface. How do you tell a woman that you have feelings for her, that you have fallen for her without scaring her. The poet makes it easy by asking the questions and letting the girl answer. Truly a touching poem with far reaching effects for a new long term relationship.

Thank you for making it available.

  • by Alex Reynozo
  • 2 years ago

This is the best poem I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing this great poem.

  • by Mar Small
  • 2 years ago

It was awesome how you put it. The format was great.

  • by Joey Boe
  • 1 year ago

The format he used was Anaphora. Anaphora is the deliberate repetition of the first part of the sentence in order to achieve an artistic effect.

  • by Swati
  • 2 years ago

Ryan I hope you and your girlfriend live hundreds of years. Most beautiful and loving poem I read till date... god bless you both..

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