1. Would It Be Ok?
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Taking care of a woman is a challenging job. This is especially true if you are her boyfriend and trying to figure out what she wants. Man and woman are a different species with different needs. How can we hope to care for each other in the way that we would like to? The truth is that it is impossible. Misunderstandings are inevitable. You cannot avoid stepping on each other's toes. The only thing you can do is to be as considerate as possible and apologize when you have wronged her.
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
I might not be the kind of boy everyone would call a perfect boyfriend. I might not have everything and might not be able to make you smile every time I was an alcoholic, a gangster, a jerk,...
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Analysis of Form and Technique
Amazing and beautiful,
not a flower or a tree.
Much prettier than that,
and only I can see.
Beautiful poem. I love it. One of my favorite poems from Familyfriendspoems.com .
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Have you ever met someone you think about
every night and every day,
someone so beautiful it's breathtaking
and words just aren't enough to say?
Loving you....
The first time I saw you
I didn't really like you
For the reason that
I am afraid to love you.
But the more I know you,
The more I love you.
For this is all I...
I never really knew you.
You were just another friend,
But when I got to know you,
I let my heart unbend.
Honestly, the first time I read this, I was deeply struck. This resembled the time when I was moving on from my crush and then I fell for another girl, who was my friend. I never knew I would...
Some people believe there is one,
The one who points your way to the sun.
A person they believe makes them complete,
The one who will support when facing defeat.
My girlfriend's name is Fereshte, and she is in the hospital. We are far, far away because she lives in the city I used to live before. Right now we are thousands of kilometers away, but our...
You're the one I can't live without.
This fact is true, I have no doubt.
I love the way you smile at me.
I love the way together we're free.
My boyfriend made me a poem just like this when we first started dating! It brought back some memories!
My love for you will never fade.
With both our feelings combined is how love is made.
You give me the strength to stand up tall.
Beautiful poem. I love it. I love the lines, "Forever in my heart is where you will be. Nobody else will enter because you have the only key."
It's that look in your eye.
It's the smile on your face
That makes time slip by,
And I know I'm in a better place.
This is a great poem. I hope you write more!
I praise God for sending me you, my love.
I praise him for changing my view.
Now you are here with me, and I'm here with you.
Now will you let me love you?
My beloved woman is a black African from Uganda. It is the greatest miracle in the universe! I use the poetry here to dedicate to her every day before going to work and show how grateful I am...
Anyone can tell you they love you.
Anyone can flatter you and tell you you're beautiful.
Anyone can make you smile and happy.
Anyone can promise you the world
Wow, I am touched by the words. So beautifully written down in love. I feel like I'm the luckiest guy in the world. So romantic indeed.
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet,
And I love you.
This poem touched my heart. It's a very sweet poem. I love it.
You showed me love that's so true,
Gave me comfort to believe in you.
You stayed beside me and held my hand,
Taught me in hard times you're always there to understand.
If only you knew what
You mean to me.
If only my heart could speak,
Then it could tell you how much l love you.
Analysis of Form and Technique
When I am without her,
the sun doesn't shine as brightly.
When I am without her,
the clouds are dark and foreboding.
I met her in med school. She is called Mariam. She is so amazing, and being with her is the most beautiful thing in my life. Her smile makes me feel heaven is for real. I am gland to say I...
I’ll love you
like you’ve never been
loved before
With all my core
Your lips so soft and red.
The thought of kissing you is stuck in my head.
Your beauty so bright and warm,
shinning through the darkest storm.
I met a girl who is very loyal to me. I loved her since the day we spoke for the first time. She is the most I want in a girl. She is the one I will die for and take a bullet for. My feelings...
Why are you so beautiful?
Why do you take my breath away?
How did I get so lucky?
How are you perfect in every single way?
I knew so many things before I actually met Janette. I knew how to love. I knew why we went to work every day. I knew how to act. The reality of this is I did not know a single thing. I am...
You're my sun on a cloudy day
You're my umbrella on a rainy day
You're my everything, what can I say
You're in my mind each and every day
A special place for you and me,
An undying bond to guide us free.
Loneliness blocking the day,
Our Love lighting the way.
This has given me words for her. I had really lacked something but have definitely found it in this poem.
I love the way
she runs her fingers
through my hair
I love the way