Falling in Love Poem

I had just started moving on from my previous relationship, and I started to crush really hard on another guy.

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To: The Cause For These Butterflies

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Published: August 2008

Whenever I'm around you,
I feel like life's complete.
I don't know what to say,
But you make my heart beat.

I'm scared to say hello,
But it hurts to say good-bye.
I've been hurt before,
Now I feel like loves just a lie.

I'm falling really hard,
There's no stopping me this time.
I think you're there to catch me,
To finally let me shine.

I lose my voice,
When you're nearby.
I'm scared to mess things up
I'm scared you'll say good-bye.

I'm sorry if I'm wrong,
When it comes to liking you.
Just let me know,
I don't want to be hurt by you

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  • by Justme
  • 4 months ago

WOW. No poem yet has done what that just did. That is EXACTLY how I feel about someone, and it is so hard. This poem has just read my feelings and thoughts. This is one incredible poem! Thank you so, so, so, so soooo much for writing this. :) <3

  • by Zedeeus, Delhi Ncr
  • 4 years ago

its been the most difficult part to lose the love of my life, I stopped trusting relationships. from fleeting ones to deeply committed ones. It's like as though I have lost that part from myself. its like an amputated phantom limb which keeps on paining. Keeps on hurting invisibly then I realized to my utmost utter that it was actually phantom me. I was haunting myself with those thoughts of past. Thoughts which never left me alone in my desolation. I'm broken. my trust is shattered. I have been a victim of loneliness and the survivor of desolation but it has taken a toll on my soul. I wish every one stays happy. amen!!!

  • by Kansas City Missouri
  • 4 years ago

At first I stop believing and then you came into my life everything changed you made me believe again I never knew I can find that perfect man. You made me smile you made me laugh and you made me feel special. I wanna thank you especially for being my boo and I'm guessing I'm saying I love you

  • by Cory Cornwell, Marion
  • 4 years ago

I do not usually do this and I do not tend to get emotional, but, I have my guitar here trying to make a lovely song out of your beautiful poem and found myself almost in tears which was really weird. Almost too perfect at what's going on in my life right now.

  • by Samantha, White Cloud Mi.
  • 5 years ago

This poem tells my story in every sine way... So far I lost everybody that means something to me... And now I know what it's like to loose someone you love with all your heart... But I just can't loose him like I lost everybody else in my life... I'm getting to that point were I don't know what to do with my life anymore... I'm scared to loose you...

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