Falling in Love Poem

I created this poem purely out of feeling. I was falling in love with this girl. It took a long time for me to tell her how I felt, and my poem here is exactly how I was feeling about her.

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I think for 13 you're a very mature young man. Don't turn into that guy women/girls hate. Treat her like a queen; she will treat you like a king, and don't cheat on her. Just break it off...

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If Only She Knew


Published by Family Friend Poems July 2012 with permission of the Author.

She has her own special way
Of turning around my terrible day.
She makes all the bad things go away
The second that she says hey.

And when I look into her eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.
Just a glance at her makes my heartbeat rise.
I know for a fact that these feelings aren't lies.

If only she knew
How much my love for her grew,
Maybe, just maybe, we could start something new,
And then I'd never feel blue.

And if beauty were inches, she'd go on for miles.
I'd better catch her before I go out of style.
I'm going to let my heart be my dial
So I can tell her what I've been feeling for a while.


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  • Enigbokan John by Enigbokan John
  • 1 year ago

I am really in love with a girl, but I don't know how to express my feelings to her for fear of the disappointment of being turned down. This poem has really helped me by giving me the much needed courage.

  • Jeshua by Jeshua
  • 5 years ago

I’m a 7th grader, almost an 8th grader, and I’ve had a crush on a girl since I met her. I basically never told her about my feelings, but this poem is the perfect thing. She loves poems, and just about 2 weeks ago she told me that she likes me. I was surprised. I didn’t tell her how I felt. She thinks that I don’t like her and that our friendship is ruined. It’s not. It actually improved, so tomorrow I will tell her my feelings about her and hope for the best.

  • Destine Baker by Destine Baker
  • 2 years ago

I have been in your position before. But now reading this poem has encouraged me to go on and express my feelings.

  • Stefanie Marshall by Stefanie Marshall
  • 3 years ago

I think for 13 you're a very mature young man. Don't turn into that guy women/girls hate. Treat her like a queen; she will treat you like a king, and don't cheat on her. Just break it off nicely. This last generation probably a little bit older than you, the men or boys are not like they were in 1950, be that good guy. Sweet poem for such a young age.

  • Daniel by Daniel
  • 5 years ago

This poem really helped me voice out my feeling to a girl I so deeply loved. Thanks a lot for this.

  • Dean Kuzoraunye by Dean Kuzoraunye
  • 6 years ago

Well, that's a sweet poem. It makes me think about someone I know I love so much. It makes me have the feeling I'm ready for the next step...

  • Faith Olabode by Faith Olabode
  • 6 years ago

There is this girl that I have deep feelings for, but I don't know how to confess to her. After reading this poem, it helped a lot. Thanks!

  • 7 years ago

Thanks for sharing this poems with us. I felt like I was reliving my memories with my first love.

  • Suicidal Bitch by Suicidal Bitch, Jersey City, NJ
  • 7 years ago

This poem was just perfection, it was beautiful. It really made me relive my first love. It made me relive those special moment's and memories we shared. It made me think that love does exist it isn't just something you make up to make people feel better or nicer about themselves. Thank you for sharing your talent with everyone, and making them feel and relive all of those same butterflies they felt with that other person, when their hearts would glow every time they heard their name or spoke to them. That's what this poem makes me think and feel, one of my favorites ever, I love it, because those times are priceless, you can't get them back but you can always remember them with a smile across your face, your first kiss, first time, first love, first everything, that is what I felt when I read that beautiful poem. Many people are scared to write this much in a comment or to share their story which is totally understandable but I feel it's a great way to express all of your feelings.

  • Nolan Cox by Nolan Cox
  • 8 years ago

This is just perfect. When reading this, I felt like I was reliving my time asking a girl out on a date.

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