21. To: The Cause For These Butterflies
Whenever I'm around you,
I feel like life's complete.
I don't know what to say,
But you make my heart beat.
Whenever I'm around you,
I feel like life's complete.
I don't know what to say,
But you make my heart beat.
WOW. No poem yet has done what that just did. That is EXACTLY how I feel about someone, and it is so hard. This poem has just read my feelings and thoughts. This is one incredible poem! Thank...
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Free fall down into the unknown
give you my heart and relinquish my soul
it's best for what life shall bestow
so I take a big step in the unknown
This is so similar to how I feel. I am falling deep for someone, but I have been hurt so much that I am scared to death. Every relationship I have been in has hurt, my first and second...
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Every time we're together,
I feel complete.
You show me love.
Falling for you.
Say yes, and we could surf the highest waves,
Your hand in mine, never losing faith.
We could climb Mt. Everest, and as we gasp for air,
You'll say you love me,
Yes, yes, more yes. I'm ready for the adventure of what lies ahead. I'm not scared or shy. I believe anything is possible as long as you're willing to try. No matter what the future holds, I...
Analysis of Form and Technique
Every day that passes us by
all I could think of is this one guy.
I never thought I'd feel this way,
but the feeling I have I want to stay.
There is this lady I first loved in my life. I don't know how to let her know I wish she could be the mother of my unborn children. I managed to tell her about a month ago; she said we should...
It's no joke,
what I say to you.
Every word that falls from lips
is absolutely true.
Oh my gosh! What a beautiful poem. I'm currently going through something like this, and it really sucks. It hurts so bad, and just thank you, because this captures exactly what I feel.
The sunshine appears to be brighter.
My heart feels a bit lighter.
More beautiful are the flowers appearing.
Miles that separate
Friends that discriminate
Circumstances that kept us apart
And those people who broke our hearts
I guess this poem tells my story... I'm in love with this AMAZING guy... This poem just pretty much describes him and our love... Even though I don't know how to tell him I love him face to...
take me
to the center of your soul
show me where you hide
lead me to the forgotten wounds
I see her every day,
But today, there is something special about her,
Something I haven't seen before.
The glow on her face,
You got me hooked, I couldn't stop reading and as I read on I could picture her and you laughing smiling, crying, glancing at each other, etc. Isn't imagery a beautiful thing :)
Nice poem,...
As I lay here in the dark by your side,
You bring me great love, and I feel great pride.
For you, my darling, are my number one.
She is unique.
Every time I see her
I just can't seem to know how to speak.
Everything around her is a total blur.
When our eyes met
for the very first time,
I knew it was you
to clear my pastime.
After reading this poem I printed it out and I gave it to my husband, I even added some of my own word and OMG!!... he totally loved it!!...
Thanks to that person who wrote this, waiting for...
All I used to feel was blue.
I used to think love itself was a lie
because of all of the fires I walked through
and all the tears that I cried.
My whole life is full of grey and dark things.
Nothing gives me any joy.
I do everything the same every day,
Every week,
I'm not scared to love you.
I'm okay when you're around.
You've given my heart a soundtrack.
I happen to like the sound.
You have a good poem here. It's very important that you use your feelings to help you choose the words. You want people to feel what you where feeling when they are reading the poem.
I want it all
The insanity
The good,
The bad,
Why did you do this?
You did this to me.
You stole my heart,
can't you see?
This story touched my heart! It's an amazing poem and is true for me in many ways. I hope it touches other people's heart like it did mine. There is too much to say about this poem, that I...
On a cold December day, in a distant unknown land,
Not long before, we were strangers; now we walk hand in hand,
On a journey through mystical mountains, draped in a glistening white snow.
A story is just beginning as our blossoming love continues to grow.
Like a bird upon a branch,
She sat so elegantly;
I knew right from the start
She was the one for me.