Would It Be Ok?
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
Taking care of a woman is a challenging job. This is especially true if you are her boyfriend and trying to figure out what she wants. Man and woman are a different species with different needs. How can we hope to care for each other in the way that we would like to? The truth is that it is impossible. Misunderstandings are inevitable. You cannot avoid stepping on each other's toes. The only thing you can do is to be as considerate as possible and apologize when you have wronged her.
Would it be ok if I took some of your time?
Would it be ok if I wrote you a rhyme?
Would it be ok if I opened my heart?
I might not be the kind of boy everyone would call a perfect boyfriend. I might not have everything and might not be able to make you smile every time I was an alcoholic, a gangster, a jerk,...
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Analysis of Form and Technique
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Amazing and beautiful,
not a flower or a tree.
Much prettier than that,
and only I can see.
Beautiful poem. I love it. One of my favorite poems from Familyfriendspoems.com .
I praise God for sending me you, my love.
I praise him for changing my view.
Now you are here with me, and I'm here with you.
Now will you let me love you?
My beloved woman is a black African from Uganda. It is the greatest miracle in the universe! I use the poetry here to dedicate to her every day before going to work and show how grateful I am...
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet,
And I love you.
This poem touched my heart. It's a very sweet poem. I love it.
Anyone can tell you they love you.
Anyone can flatter you and tell you you're beautiful.
Anyone can make you smile and happy.
Anyone can promise you the world
I have met the right girl for me, but I met her before this poem. After reading this poem, I have realized that I felt the same way about her. We have been a couple since October 19, 2018,...
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Some people believe there is one,
The one who points your way to the sun.
A person they believe makes them complete,
The one who will support when facing defeat.
My girlfriend's name is Fereshte, and she is in the hospital. We are far, far away because she lives in the city I used to live before. Right now we are thousands of kilometers away, but our...
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You're the one I can't live without.
This fact is true, I have no doubt.
I love the way you smile at me.
I love the way together we're free.
My boyfriend made me a poem just like this when we first started dating! It brought back some memories!
It's that look in your eye.
It's the smile on your face
That makes time slip by,
And I know I'm in a better place.
This is a great poem. I hope you write more!
Analysis of Form and Technique
When I am without her,
the sun doesn't shine as brightly.
When I am without her,
the clouds are dark and foreboding.
I met her in med school. She is called Mariam. She is so amazing, and being with her is the most beautiful thing in my life. Her smile makes me feel heaven is for real. I am gland to say I...
I love the way
she runs her fingers
through my hair
I love the way