Passionate Love Poem

My name is Brandee Hilbert. I am 28 years old, and I have lived in the state of Kentucky my whole life. I really love to write poems. Writing poems helps me deal with many different emotions in a more productive way. As most people know, "Life ain't easy!" I wrote this poem a few years ago for a guy I will always love. This is one of my favorite poems that I've ever written. I was introduced to poetry from a girl I lived with in Lexington at the Home Of The Crittenden. I was about 13.

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I want to credit my poem to my husband, Robert Carter, because it's always better with him.

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Making Love

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Published by Family Friend Poems May 2012

Underneath the moonlit sky, beneath a blanket of stars,
I lay with you in a land afar.
It's so quiet; all I can hear
is my breath I vaguely take with you so near.
You have my body bound.
I'm lost in your presence, where I can't be found.
You kiss my neck; it feels so nice.
You have me feeling so enticed.   
As my body emerges,
it yearns and it urges
to feel your embrace
and to taste your taste.
As you put it in,
a little smile grins.
Should I whisper, faster?
Or should I scream for my Master?
You're pulling my hair,
I feel, as if I were floating on air.
As I tremble and begin to shake,
you quiver and quake.
Underneath the moonlit sky, beneath a blanket of stars,
I'm yours, wherever you are.

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  • Brandee Hilbert-Carter by Brandee Hilbert-Carter
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I want to credit my poem to my husband, Robert Carter, because it's always better with him.

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