You tell me that you love me when I don't love myself.
You're the one who holds my hand when I need the most help.
You smile when you're sad to make me smile too.
You make my life so much better by everything you do.
Well done, Miller. The strongest aspect of your poem is sentiment. You have expressed it so openly that you are like picking up rocks from the beach. None will be the same size, nor the same...
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I've tried to write so many times,
But it's been hard to say in rhymes.
I'll try once more and hope you'll see
Just what your love has meant to me.
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A mother is special; she's more than a friend.
Whenever you need her, she'll give you a hand.
She'll lead you and guide you in all that you do,
Try all that she can just to see you get through.
This is a wonderful poem. It evoked a strong emotional response & made me think of my own wonderful mother. I very nearly teared up. I couldn't have written it any better. Well done.
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A mother gives her children
Stepping stones to the stars.
Her love is unconditional;
Her heart has no bars.
I watched the cop ask my mom, "Do you have a child?" I quickly butt in. "Yes, she does. She's my mom and forever she'll be mine and that's why I love her."
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Mommy, I love you
More than you see.
You have always been there
When I needed you to be.
If it wasn't for my mom I never would have made it in my life. I have always been a daddy's girl and wrote this to let my mom know how I really appreciate and love her even if it seemed I didn't.
They way I feel, I can't explain
The gratitude inside
For all the days and all the nights
You spent right by my side.
Every day of my life, even when I have cried, you have always been standing there with your arms open wide. You say you are perfect to me no matter what they say, even though today's been bad...
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You brought me my first toy,
My first bike and baseball glove.
You filled my heart with joy,
And you filled my life with love.
I really love this poem and it is true - mother is the best of all!
Analysis of Form and Technique
The one who brought me down to earth
And held me every day.
The one who gracefully gave me birth
And said, I love you in every way.
Very good usage of words. Rhyming pattern is good and the structure rocks. One of the best I've read so far. Keep on writing more!
From the first shine of light
To the first breath of my life,
You have been there from day to night.
Dear Mom, you'll always be my partner in crime.
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You are the sunlight in my day.
You are the moon I see far away.
You are the tree I lean upon.
You are the one that makes troubles be gone.
I am the author of this piece. I wrote it for my mother so many years ago for school. I had no idea it was published here or that it had had such a powerful effect. I'm honored. It's been a...
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