Brother Poem

I wrote this poem when it seemed like my whole life was closing in around me and everything that could possibly go wrong was happening to me. I was losing my family, my friends, everyone who I cared about. And I couldn't seem to see the bright side to any of it. Things are starting to get better now though. It will never be the same again though. Nothing could ever erase all the things that happened...and that will never change.

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Suffocating

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Published: March 2009

The clouds are rolling in
And I can't see the sun
The raindrops seem to shatter
Any good that has become
I need someone to save me
To save me from this fog
It's trying to suffocate me
It's already begun
It fills my every being
And chokes me at the thought
That everything that used to be
Must be somehow lost
Now I can barely breathe
Yet no one is around
To save me from this torcher
To find me in this crowd.
Just hold me in your arms
And tell me its alright
I need someone to save me
Please save me tonight

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  • by Amanda
  • 9 years ago

This poem is wonderful...it has touched me in soo many ways....I'm currently going through the same things right now and having a hard time in life and it just seems like its not getting any better...I basically am crying out inside for the same thing this girl is for....some people just don't understand.....

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