Boyfriend Poem

From his hug to his touch, his kiss, his smile, his stare, his warmth, I love everything about him.

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This is a lovely poem. Choicest words, correct rhymes, tender but intense feelings. The writer not only wrote but also lived his emotions. What a grand way to introduce the beloved. Very...

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Analysis of Form and Technique

What I Love About You

© more by Nidhi Kaul

Published by Family Friend Poems September 2009 with permission of the Author.

The sparkle in your eye,
The warmth of your skin,
Your breath on my neck
That shakes me within.

The touch of your hand,
The smell of your hair,
The naughtiness in your smile,
That strength in your stare.

Your kiss on my lips,
Your body near mine,
The stroke of your touch,
Makes everything feel fine.

The compassion in your touch,
The power in your face,
The beating of your heart,
That we may never end our embrace.

The beauty of your kiss,
And that magic in your touch.
It is for all these reasons and more
Why I love you so much...

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Analysis of Form and Technique

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Techniques this poem uses:

  • This poem is made up of quatrains, which are stanzas that have four lines each.
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  • This poem follows the ABCB rhyming pattern. The last words in the second and fourth lines rhyme with each other.

    The touch of your hand, A
    The smell of your hair. B
    The naughtiness in your smile, C
    That strength in your stare. B

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  • The poet uses some of the five senses to describe how she feels about her boyfriend.

    The warmth of your skin.
    Your breath on my neck

    The touch of your hand,
    The smell of your hair.

    Your kiss on my lips,
    The stroke of your touch

    The beating of your heart.

    Read more about 5 senses in poetry

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  • Kdl by Kdl
  • 2 years ago

What a wonderful flowing poem. It's full of passion and deep reasoning of truly loving somebody. Thanks!

  • Subhash Bansal by Subhash Bansal
  • 6 years ago

This is a lovely poem. Choicest words, correct rhymes, tender but intense feelings. The writer not only wrote but also lived his emotions. What a grand way to introduce the beloved. Very difficult to forget but very easy to read the poem again and again to delve into the heart of the poet and his subject. Many, many congratulations for providing us a thing of beauty which we would enjoy during all times to come.

  • Manali Gaikwad by Manali Gaikwad
  • 7 years ago

It's an amazing poem that reminds me of us. I really feel lucky to have you, dear. Please spend the rest of life with me.

  • Jessica Degroft by Jessica Degroft
  • 8 years ago

I read this poem, and it reminds me of how lucky I am to have my boyfriend. He constantly reminds me that I'm beautiful and he loves me. We stayed up most of the night last night talking together on Facebook. We told each other our deepest secrets and thoughts. How can you express love like me and my boyfriend do. For all the girls who have been dumped, you will find your everything. It took me since I was 14 to find the man of my dreams. (I'm almost 30!) love works in mysterious ways you just have to wait for love to show up on your front door.

  • Patience Siziba by Patience Siziba, Zimbabwe
  • 10 years ago

This poem makes me so much fall in love with my boyfriend, Lee. We met under the most weird circumstances but it feels like we have always been there together...Babe as we turn one year love, know that I love you more.

  • Hillcrest South Africa by Hillcrest South Africa
  • 11 years ago

This poem it seems like it was written by me because it says all graciously, felicitously, winningly, triumphantly words that that make adore my affectionate...this escalating my sense of missing my lovey-dove

  • South Africa by South Africa
  • 11 years ago

I love this poem so dearly it completely says all the right words I have for the man I truly love but too bad I doubt if he seems to realise that.

  • Destiny by Destiny, MN
  • 11 years ago

This poem reminds me of my special guy!:D Love him to death :')

  • Freida Coleman by Freida Coleman
  • 11 years ago

I love this poem!! it has the same words I would use to describe my boyfriend!!!!!!!

  • Tebohokompi by Tebohokompi, South Africa
  • 11 years ago

It opened my eyes of how much my girl Relebohile loves me and that I should always try to be there whenever she needs my support

  • Becca Murfreesboro by Becca Murfreesboro
  • 11 years ago

This is soo true because I love a guy way too much and I guess I'm acting lovesick.

  • Jacob Nealis by Jacob Nealis
  • 11 years ago

Me and my girlfriend Melissa are going through some tough times.. and this poem reminds me of her.. I miss her to death.. thank you.. thank you so much for this beautiful poem.

  • Stephanie McLaughlin by Stephanie McLaughlin
  • 12 years ago

This poem has made me open my eyes do realizing how much I miss my true love. We are not talking anymore and I do not know for how long but I miss her face and her body against me and her kisses all over me.

  • Jamie Normall by Jamie Normall, Il
  • 13 years ago

This is how I felt about my EX every word is true I miss him so much and I wanna thank you for this poem

  • Joe by Joe, Clearwater
  • 14 years ago

This poem says all the right words...that makes me feel complete!! Love you!! Joe!!!

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