Feelings Poem by Teens

Feeling Like I Can't Be Saved

This is something I wrote as a way of venting my fear about the struggle life is and can be.

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Published: December 2016

I'm lost in the dark, I feel so alone.
Surrounded by demons, I want to go home,
But how did I get to this nightmarish state?
Can I be saved, or is it too late?

I'm scared and I'm done being strong.
If you could see what I see, you'd know that I'm gone.
Can I come back? I want to go home.
Don't want to be scared, lost or alone.

I'm trying, I really am, can't you see?
It's just so hard and they're so angry.
I'm falling so fast but can't seem to slow down.
If I can't stop I'll smash into the ground.

I'm lost in the dark. I feel so alone.
Surrounded by torment, I can't go home.
I feel their anger, I see their hate.
I can't wake up, it's already too late.



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