Feelings Poem by Teens

Kinda about me...it was inspired by the grey skies and pouring rain outside my window. A picture filled my mind, so I decided to paint it down with words.

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Great piece. The poem touches me every time I read it. It exactly described my past experience.

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Girl In The Rain

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Published: August 2008

Dressed in a sundress
Under the pouring rain,
She twirled around,
Raising her hands to the air.
Droplets fell onto her hair.

Barefooted as she started dancing,
Letting her hair free.
She's the girl in the rain.
The water numbed all her pain.

Her grief hidden behind a mask,
She lifted her eyes to the sky
And started to dance,
Throwing away all her sorrow.
She started to smile again.
She's the girl in the rain.

Nobody knows who she was.
No one knows where she came from.
All they knew, she was silent,
Like the wind in everyone's hair.

Soaked, wet, and cold,
Ignored, rejected, and unappreciated,
Like the roses in her hands,
Wilted and dead.
She let the rain fall onto her head.
She's the girl in the rain.

Everything was different
After she left.
All they could remember
Time and time again,
Silent from all her pain,
She was the girl in the rain.

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  • Patrick Mukamba by Patrick Mukamba
  • 3 weeks ago

Great piece. The poem touches me every time I read it. It exactly described my past experience.

  • Brandi by Brandi, Rochester
  • 7 years ago

I loved this, it expressed how I've come to be and what has happened in my life. I can practically picture myself as the girl in the rain.

  • Maria by Maria, Wolverhampton UK
  • 9 years ago

This poem really touched me. Them few words are to say how most teenagers feel. I think this poem is an excellent way to express yourself. It is excellent.

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