Confused about Love Poem

I wrote this poem when I was feeling sad and when I felt like no one cared about what happened to me.

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I fell in love with a person who doesn't even live on the same side of the world as me - I'm in the States, and they're in Asia. They show their affection by playing with me, teasing,...

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If I Tell You, Will You?

© more by Shianne

Published: April 2011

The answer lies true in my heart,
So if I tell you, will you tear it apart?
Or will you keep it a secret so only you know?
Will you cover it up so it won't show?
Will you tell me what I know is true
So I can continue loving you?
Or will you feed me all your lies?
Hide the truth behind your eyes.
Pretend you never did really care.
Lies and fake hate, you declare.
Worst shall become the best.
When that happens, shall I rest
Or will I live with this misery?
And will you ever get to see
Past all these lies to what's true
So you can see how much I love you?

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  • Lana by Lana
  • 6 months ago

I have a crush on a guy who doesn't even notice me. So frustrating, and I wish he knew that I loved him. My heart questions what he'd say though.

  • Zhar Eckert by Zhar Eckert
  • 8 months ago

I fell in love with a person who doesn't even live on the same side of the world as me - I'm in the States, and they're in Asia. They show their affection by playing with me, teasing, tangling my heartstrings with wayward "I love you's" and empty "I care about you's" too.

I didn't even realize I was so deeply in love with them, caught on the thorns from their beautiful roses, until it was pointed out to me. They've said that they knew long before I did and have been kept up at night with the pondering thoughts of what we were, what we are, and what we could be - yet they don't seem affected too badly like I am.

I can hardly think about them without crying, and my mind is cloudy, thoughts heavy, trying to decipher their enigmas. It's worse than any love I've ever felt before...and I don't know if I should just leave and try to let the feelings die out or stay holding on as a drowning girl would hold onto a life-jacket. I just don't know. I'm so confused. Why must love be so confusing, so painful? Why?

  • Aurora by Aurora
  • 2 years ago

I fell in love with this guy, but I'm afraid that he doesn't love me like I love him.

  • Treaser Eagle by Treaser Eagle, Malawi
  • 7 years ago

I am confused with the love life I am going through right now. I fell in love with a guy and we agreed to marry but now my mind has changed, I don't want and feel him either. I want to quit the relationship but the guy has already paid my dowry. I am really confused. But my question is: Should dowry be the string attached to quit this love? What if we get married and I feel the same in marriage? Will this marriage work? Will I enjoy the marriage?

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