Funny Love Poem

When Can I Sleep With You?

I wrote this in the 7th grade and now out of high school I found it and I believe it to be a sweet funny poem.

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This poem really put a smile on my face. It's sweet, funny, and yet it's a bit romantic.

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Love

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Published: August 2010

When darkness falls and we're apart
Can love heal this lonely heart
I love you dearly that I do
Sleep is good when dreaming of you
With all my love I give to you
You are so sweet I know not how I'm with you


Read the first word of every line lol

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  • by Mr. Johnson
  • 4 months ago

This poem really put a smile on my face. It's sweet, funny, and yet it's a bit romantic.

  • by Shayy, Louisiana
  • 4 years ago

This poem is funny yet loving it is a way to ask a question and to give a loving way to ask the question.

  • by Marie, Houston
  • 5 years ago

Very funny!!!(: I loved this one!! Continue writing poetry!!(: you go dude!!(:

  • by Hannah
  • 5 years ago

Very cute and funny, made me smile when I read the first word of every line:) You should continue writing poetry, you're very talented! :D

  • by Chelsea, Birmingham
  • 6 years ago

very funny, great use of poetry, depicts a different way to use poetry :) thumbs up!

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