World Of Drugs And Liquor

My name is Courtney and I love to write I hope to one day become an author. Even though I'm only 15 now (Soon to be sixteen). :D Let me know what you think of my poem. I need hardcore criticism!!

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Crashing Down

Published by Family Friend Poems February 2010 with permission of the Author.

Floating by on a cloud
The world of drugs and liquor
All around

Moving, jumping out
Falling down
Screaming loud

The monster behind,
The curtian
The shadows of it all

The drugs go deep
The pain seeps in

My head spins
My heart breaks
The world stops

Crashing down
Worlds away
Sleep sets in

Drugs go deep
Pain goes deeper

My heart stops
As I come
Crashing down

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