Feelings Poem by Teens

This is something I wrote for myself to get my feelings about my depression out.

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I once tried to write down a poem with my true feelings in it, but the second someone saw it they hated it. They judged it without thinking that what I wrote was true or not. So now I'm...

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Would You Care

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Published: August 2013

Don't be fooled by the mask I create
For it is all a lie
Underneath my calm sophisticated facade
There is nothing but lies and sadness

I need you to help me
I need you to reach out
Wipe the blind stare of the living dead away from my face
So that my heart can grow small but feeble wings
I need you to breathe life into me

After you find what a wreck I am
will you still care?

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  • Alyssa Paige Riley by Alyssa Paige Riley
  • 5 years ago

I once tried to write down a poem with my true feelings in it, but the second someone saw it they hated it. They judged it without thinking that what I wrote was true or not. So now I'm forced to write poems in secret, otherwise I'm going to be even more judged. I wish I could share them, but I don't think I can handle anymore judgement of my poems.

  • Mirembe Tracy by Mirembe Tracy
  • 6 months ago

Just because a few judged you wrongly doesn't mean that the whole world will do the same thing. I will be glad if you share some.

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