Teen Crush Poem

This is a poem that I just sat down and wrote in about 10 minutes. Surprisingly, it's one of my best!!
It's inspired by someone I saw at school. We never were in love or even liked each other. The first day I saw him, he kept staring and this poem is an exaggeration of that.
Hope you like it!

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Beautiful Eyes

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Published: March 2014

The first day I saw him,
I didn't know what was going to happen.
He was one among the crowd,
Not at all different!

The second day I saw him,
There was some thing different.
He was not the same person,
Turned unique all of a sudden!

The third day I saw him,
He looked into my eyes!
I stood transfixed in his gaze,
In my stomach were butterflies.

The fourth day I saw him,
He looked in my eyes again.
Silent words were exchanged
between our gaze.

The fifth day I saw him.
I went up and asked,
Have we met before somewhere?
Or are we related from the past?

He shook his head
And here's what he said!

Yes my love, we met in our past life!
We were two souls that became one.
In life and death we were together,
And again here we've come!

I turned my head and walked away,
Taking a silent oath
not to look at him the next day!

The sixth day I saw him,
Those beautiful eyes looked in mine again.
It felt like we'd known each other forever
speaking of pasts and future.

That day I knew we're meant to be.
Whether it comes true or not,
We'll just have to wait and see!

For now all that I know,
Those beautiful eyes are in what I'm lost!
So just remember that if you don't find me,
In his eyes, lost I will be, conversing silently!

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  • Berenice by Berenice
  • 2 years ago

WOW, I am speechless by this amazing poem! I LOVE IT! Through every word I felt as if I was there at the moment. I am currently in something so similar to this, but I never saw how I could put it into words. The person I have found myself lost in has beautiful green eyes that every time I see them I find myself lost. I seem to not find myself because "in his eyes, lost I will be." (:

  • Sharon Sv by Sharon Sv
  • 5 years ago

the best poem ever written <3

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