Teen Falling in Love Poem

This is about my boyfriend. We've broken up now and it was hard; it really did tear me up, so I wanted to post this poem as sort of a memory of what we used to be. Enjoy...

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When I was five, I met a boy who was six. I had just moved into the neighborhood and our moms were talking. When I asked him if he wanted to play with me, he said yes. And while we were...

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In Love With You

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Published: April 2009

You're always in my thoughts.
You're always in my dreams,
And so a life without you would
Just tear away at the seams.

It's you who keeps me up all night,
The one getting me through the day,
And so it seems to me that there
Is only one thing left to say.

I don't know how to say it,
To make it sound so true,
So I'll say it how I feel it.
I'm completely in love with you.

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  • by Cat Padilla
  • 11 months ago

I am desperately in love with a girl, but she loves her best friend, Shane, who's also my close friend. Shane has a kind-of girlfriend out of school that he's liked since preschool, and we're in 7th grade. Alex, the girl, is really mean to me but doesn't really try to be, but I'm sometimes snappy with her. We fight a lot, but she gets me in ways nobody else does. The problem is we're on-again-off-again, never really close friends. I love her and would do anything for her. So every time she hurts me I bend to make her happy. She's a jock, so we don't/can't hang out according to the rules of middle school. I think I fell too hard. It hurts every day, but I can't give up hope. And Shane is in between, he struggles with OCD and insecurity. Alex struggles with depression and temper, and I struggle with minor depression, insecurity, and temper. We're a messed up crew, but I can't stop hoping we can turn around.

  • by Alice Bell
  • 2 years ago

When I was five, I met a boy who was six. I had just moved into the neighborhood and our moms were talking. When I asked him if he wanted to play with me, he said yes. And while we were running, I fell down, and he asked if I was okay. Then he helped me up, and we became best friends. Like very close best friends, and we told each other everything. We still do, but it's different now.

Last Halloween we went to a party as adventurers and won the prize for best costume. He was dropping me off at my house and I said goodnight and I was about to walk into the house when he said, "Wait a sec, Ali," and grabs my hand. I looked at our hands linked together, then looked at him and asked, "Why?" and he did the most awesome thing. He leaned down and kissed me softly at first. Then it turned intense, and I loved every second of it. Then he pulled away and whispered in my ear, "I love you." I then smiled at him and said, "I love you, too," but he wasn't finished. He said, "I’ve loved you since our eyes first locked. It was love at first sight."

  • by Sariah Coverdale
  • 4 years ago

I like this boy at school. He is in one of my classes. The first day he spoke to me I fell in love with him. Everything about him, his personality, he was also cute. No one liked him in the way I liked him. Being a girl all most obsessed with him I tried finding almost everything about him. I was good friends with his friends and begged one of his friends to give me his number. After that it almost like a dream come true we texted each other for it seemed like hours talking about everything. After a while I got the confidence to ask him out. So I did and got rejected. It broke my heart in two. Still I have feelings for him. Even when he says no. Love sucks when it's wrong.

  • by Siddhartha Mitra, Kolkata, India
  • 11 months ago

Hey Sariah,
You know what is the best love...one that is one sided, for nobody can take it away from you. I am a guy and though I write poems, I am not that good with girls. There were girls I loved, but they didn't like me. I just continued caring for them. It calmed me and kept me happy. After all, happiness is what is needed most in life.

  • by Kayla, Florida
  • 5 years ago

So there's this boy. I've liked him since 4th grade. We were always friends but I never told him how I felt. I got really jealous in 8th grade because we started talking then I found out he got a girlfriend. They went out for 2 years, but they fought a lot so they ended it. He texted literally a month after. And we started talking again. I was so excited because I finally got my chance. He's honestly been the best thing for me because nobody has ever cared and tried for so long to keep me in their life. He tells me he loves me every chance he gets. He holds me in his arms and squeezes me as tight as it gets. I sneak out to see him even though I've never done that for anyone else. But it's the least I can do because he says I love you. I asked him the other day why I mean so much to him. He told me, "you get me like nobody else, nobody has ever tried to keep a smile on my face. You hate it when I'm upset and so do I because I know I take it out on you. Idk why you love me so much. But I'm telling you right now once we're older and out of school. I'm putting a ring on your finger and never letting you go."

  • by Liza Michelson
  • 2 years ago

I am very moved by your response. It's amazing what he has made you feel. My boyfriend is older than me but he is quite fond of me as well. I love him very much so. The fact that yours told you he would put a ring on your finger because of his love and care for you has taught him so much... It almost makes me wish I had accepted mine before. Good luck with future events hun. Be happy, and stay healthy :)

  • by Karen, Kent
  • 6 years ago

I have a story about the guy I'm with. I can't tell him how I feel because with his autism he wouldn't understand. I have tried but he doesn't seem to know what I'm on about :( it's hard for me but I'll fight for him all the way .. My boyfriends addicted to weed and he does try to get off it but he can't it's hard but it's okay cause he's not paranoid or anything but he can get a little depressed sometimes but he does the most sweetest things for me so for someone who doesn't understand how I feel about them why would he do such sweet things for me ? I guess that I maybe just don't understand
:/

And if you love someone it's always worth a second go !

  • by Autumn, Cleveland
  • 6 years ago

There was this boy that came to my school. His name was John. At first I didn't really like him, but as time went on I started to really like him. Then he asked me out and I said yes. We were going out for a little over a month. We would text each other everyday and night. On weekends we would talk all night. Then one way we were at lunch in school and the security guard took him to the office. I was freaking out because after lunch my friend Isaiah told me that he had weed that he found in the bathroom and the security guard knew about it. So of course he was suspended, but only for 10 days. So 10 days goes by and he doesn't come back to school. So, I was like what's going on? Again, Isaiah knew and he told me that John had gotten expelled and that he could possibly go to jail. He went to court and fortunately he wasn't sent to jail. And then we broke up because during all this we didn't really see each other that much. I was heartbroken but didn't show it because all my friends thought it was better that me and him weren't together because they said he was a pothead. He's not addicted or anything though. We didn't talk for like a month and then he called me one day, then we started texting again. he told me that he still had a lot of feelings for me and that he would go back out with me. and I feel the same way, only difference is that I'm in love with him...What should I do..??

  • by Meghan, Windsor
  • 9 years ago

I had been best friends with my neighbor. We spent long hours on the telephone at night and texted each other during the day, when one day he told me he loved me. I had thought he was kidding yet he seemed so serious. He never let it go. He asked me out on a date and I had to say no thinking that it would ruin our relationship as best friends. When I said no he moved on liking two other girls, now he doesn't talk to me. Even though I said no, our relationship we had is ruined.

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