Emo Poem

A girl writes about how she feels invisible to the people around her. I felt invisible and alone.

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I am so alone and some people say that is good but it is actually my greatest fear. My parents and family don't understand they wouldn't begin to know the problems I hold in my hands. You...

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I Feel Invisible


Published: September 2008

: tears in my eyes
: my fears alive
: dreams where lost
: hopes were dry
: all alone
: breaking of my heart
: no longer wanting to be alive
: to play my part
: my family hadn't a care for me
: my friends barely spoke a word to me
: I feel left out
: not a soul cared that I exist         
: and was actually there
: but as times flew by, memory of me disappears.

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  • Evi by Evi, Claremore Oklahoma
  • 7 years ago

I am so alone and some people say that is good but it is actually my greatest fear. My parents and family don't understand they wouldn't begin to know the problems I hold in my hands. You want to think about being invisible try being the one to not talk for 3 years at school . Nobody really understands me I am 15. But then again I don't even know who I am anymore. So why should any of you know what it is like to be in my shoes? No friends ,family doesn't understand, and a brother that rapes you, you tend to not care about the world. I wish I could actually get e-mails from some of you so I wouldn't feel so alone.

  • Ryssa by Ryssa, NC
  • 8 years ago

I can relate right now. I'm in a hospital b/c no one cares bout me or shows it. I'm hurting bad just lost my bestfriend, now I'm all on my own .
heading to a residential.

  • Racheal by Racheal
  • 8 years ago

Wow, this is amazing! This is exactly how I feel.. I sit in my room everynight because my parents don't understand the pain I'm in, they don't care. My dad abused my brother and now me cause my brothers gone. I sit here in my room by myself and write poems and listen to music.

  • Toxic Sadness by Toxic Sadness
  • 8 years ago

oh wow it reminds me of me I hate life because nobody cares about me it's like I'm not even there

  • Erika by Erika, Texas
  • 8 years ago

This poem relates a lot to me. I feel exactly like how you feel. I feel lonely like no one cares, like my mom and my dad don't understand me. I feel invisible in school. And I don't make friends.

  • Love-Hurtsxox by Love-Hurtsxox
  • 9 years ago

this is exactly how I feel,
it's good to know that I'm not the only one,

  • Joe by Joe
  • 9 years ago

Omg, this is exactly how I feel right now, this is what drew me to this website. Loved this poem too.

  • Lindsay by Lindsay, South Dakota
  • 9 years ago

I really like this poem. It sounds a lot of like how I feel now. I love writing poems and thinking of how I wish I could change my life.

  • me by me
  • 9 years ago

I love this poem. and I totally know how you feel. My parents split up just about a year ago and my dad abused me and my brothers and sisters. So I live with my mom now. Every night I sit in my room alone writing poems and songs about the things I wish I could change about my life. Sometimes I write stories about my life if it was perfect

  • Kristina by Kristina
  • 9 years ago

I really love this poem. It's not easy to be me I have been through a lot of crap. And the most important thing I have learned was that it only made me stronger.

  • sCaReD by sCaReD
  • 10 years ago

wow. I feel.... just like that RIGHT now. I got to start righting poetry

  • Ashley by Ashley
  • 10 years ago

wow that's just like how it is with me no one cares about me, I'm so glad I'm not the only one in this world ...thx

  • XxXdarkness around meXxX by XxXdarkness around meXxX
  • 10 years ago

I love this. it gives me a new feeling. it makes me feel like I am not the only one who feels invisible. I hope you keep writing sensational poems like this, and that you receive more attention from people who love you.

  • nicole by nicole
  • 10 years ago

I feel the same way as you do and my dad and mom don't even care I sit alone in my room and write poems and songs so don't feel bad if you feel like this cause I'm right beside you

  • Ashley by Ashley
  • 10 years ago

I absolutely love this, because it makes me think of well... me.
I feel the exact same way.
I love it

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