Hurting Poem by Teens

A girl writes about how she feels invisible to the people around her. I felt invisible and alone.

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Hi! Evi I'm Nick, I'm 14, and I just wanted to say I really do understand what you're going through I've been through and still going through a lot of hurt and pain. So if you a ear or a...

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I Feel Invisible

© more by Amanda

Published by Family Friend Poems September 2008 with permission of the Author.

tears in my eyes
my fears alive
dreams were lost
hopes were dry
all alone
breaking of my heart
no longer wanting to be alive
to play my part
my family hadn't a care for me
my friends barely spoke a word to me
I feel left out
not a soul cared that I exist         
and was actually there
but as times flew by, memory of me disappears


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  • Evi by Evi, Claremore Oklahoma
  • 12 years ago

I am so alone and some people say that is good but it is actually my greatest fear. My parents and family don't understand they wouldn't begin to know the problems I hold in my hands. You want to think about being invisible try being the one to not talk for 3 years at school . Nobody really understands me I am 15. But then again I don't even know who I am anymore. So why should any of you know what it is like to be in my shoes? No friends ,family doesn't understand, and a brother that rapes you, you tend to not care about the world. I wish I could actually get e-mails from some of you so I wouldn't feel so alone.

  • Nick Kane by Nick Kane
  • 6 months ago

Hi! Evi I'm Nick, I'm 14, and I just wanted to say I really do understand what you're going through I've been through and still going through a lot of hurt and pain. So if you a ear or a shoulder you can talk to me. I Hope you have a great day and I Hope maybe I made you smile at least for a while.

  • Ryssa by Ryssa, NC
  • 12 years ago

I can relate right now. I'm in a hospital b/c no one cares bout me or shows it. I'm hurting bad just lost my bestfriend, now I'm all on my own .
heading to a residential.

  • Racheal by Racheal
  • 13 years ago

Wow, this is amazing! This is exactly how I feel.. I sit in my room everynight because my parents don't understand the pain I'm in, they don't care. My dad abused my brother and now me cause my brothers gone. I sit here in my room by myself and write poems and listen to music.

  • Toxic Sadness by Toxic Sadness
  • 13 years ago

oh wow it reminds me of me I hate life because nobody cares about me it's like I'm not even there

  • Erika by Erika, Texas
  • 13 years ago

This poem relates a lot to me. I feel exactly like how you feel. I feel lonely like no one cares, like my mom and my dad don't understand me. I feel invisible in school. And I don't make friends.

  • Love-Hurtsxox by Love-Hurtsxox
  • 14 years ago

this is exactly how I feel,
it's good to know that I'm not the only one,

  • Joe by Joe
  • 14 years ago

Omg, this is exactly how I feel right now, this is what drew me to this website. Loved this poem too.

  • Lindsay by Lindsay, South Dakota
  • 14 years ago

I really like this poem. It sounds a lot of like how I feel now. I love writing poems and thinking of how I wish I could change my life.

  • me by me
  • 14 years ago

I love this poem. and I totally know how you feel. My parents split up just about a year ago and my dad abused me and my brothers and sisters. So I live with my mom now. Every night I sit in my room alone writing poems and songs about the things I wish I could change about my life. Sometimes I write stories about my life if it was perfect

  • Kristina by Kristina
  • 14 years ago

I really love this poem. It's not easy to be me I have been through a lot of crap. And the most important thing I have learned was that it only made me stronger.

  • sCaReD by sCaReD
  • 14 years ago

wow. I feel.... just like that RIGHT now. I got to start righting poetry

  • Ashley by Ashley
  • 15 years ago

wow that's just like how it is with me no one cares about me, I'm so glad I'm not the only one in this world ...thx

  • XxXdarkness around meXxX by XxXdarkness around meXxX
  • 15 years ago

I love this. it gives me a new feeling. it makes me feel like I am not the only one who feels invisible. I hope you keep writing sensational poems like this, and that you receive more attention from people who love you.

  • nicole by nicole
  • 15 years ago

I feel the same way as you do and my dad and mom don't even care I sit alone in my room and write poems and songs so don't feel bad if you feel like this cause I'm right beside you

  • Ashley by Ashley
  • 15 years ago

I absolutely love this, because it makes me think of well... me.
I feel the exact same way.
I love it

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