Depression Poem by Teens

The Harsh Truth Of Life With Depression

This is my poem about what it is like to live in a world as a depressed teenager where everyone is trying to instruct you on how to feel and behave.

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I love this poem. It has a very heart touching story. I also fall into this situation sometimes, and it's so difficult to overcome the depression.

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Who They Wanted Her To Be

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Published: August 2014

She took a deep breath,
She counted to three,
A picture in her head,
Of who they wanted me to be.

They wanted her to be normal,
Happy and kind.
They never thought,
That this girl would be blind.

Not blind by the meaning,
But blind in the heart.
Blinded by darkness,
Blinded by dark.

She walks around lifeless,
Her heart beating but dead.
A walking corpse
She is lost inside her head.

Things have no meaning,
At least not anymore.
She was not how she was,
How she was once before.

She is one of the living
But one of the dead.
A part of her is missing.
She hangs on by a thread.

She hung her head low,
Took one final bow.
She stepped off the edge
Saying one final vow.

"I will not change who I am.
As hard as any of you try,
This is me giving up,
This is one last goodbye."

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  • by Priyanka
  • 2 weeks ago

I love this poem. It has a very heart touching story. I also fall into this situation sometimes, and it's so difficult to overcome the depression.

  • by Kimberly K Brooks, Parma, Ohio
  • 4 months ago

This poem breaks my heart and soul. I am hurting in my heart for you, but also for my own daughter. After several years of living in complete misery and isolation, my children and myself are finally free now, but we are damaged and have so much emotional baggage that we carry around each and every day. My daughter went from this beautiful, outgoing, and optimistic little girl, to a very depressed and dead all the way to the core teenager. She is so dark inside and out now. However, I am starting to get her into counseling and hopefully with any luck and prayers my baby can find her way back out from the darkness that has engulfed her. Happiness and brightness are what you guys deserve and to know that your life is worth so much more than giving up or giving in.

  • by JeezyLouise
  • 6 months ago

This is such a sad but beautiful poem. You are really talented. Please don't ever try to change who you are to please others. Be yourself!

  • by Divyanshi Verma
  • 8 months ago

This is so true. The bitter truth of the society. They will not try to understand what you are and help you. Instead, they will want you to change and become a person they like. But no. We must stop. And be ourselves!

  • by Neko Cat
  • 1 year ago

I feel this way all the time, and whenever I try and talk about how I feel, everyone thinks I'm exaggerating.

  • by Sylvia Gray-Perry, Chattaroy, Washington
  • 1 year ago

This is so sad. It touched my soul. It's sad that other people have to go through terrible things, and are forced to live a life where they're not appreciated. I know how it feels. Most of the time, I'm curled up in bed, in excruciating pain. Both, physical and emotionally. I'm so sorry that this had to happen. I wish I could take away other people's pain away, as well as my own.

  • by Abigail Paris
  • 1 year ago

Wow. This got me! I could understand every word! Almost as if I wrote it myself!

  • by Quinn C. Gravatt
  • 1 year ago

I understand this poem more then I probably should. Sometimes I feel like I'm two different people, the person my friends and family want me to be, and then I'm the person I've become because of the depression. I went through a lot as a kid and grew up too fast but now it feels like I can't reverse time or even look at myself in the mirror without asking who is looking back at me.

  • by Elizabeth, Singapore
  • 2 years ago

"this is me giving up... this is one last goodbye."
you made me want to cry.

I was just at the hospital yesterday. my anti-depression drugs caused urinary retention. They stuck a catheter up me.. again..... this is the second time. It hurts. beyond that, it crushed my spirit. how much more can I take. First it's depression. Now it's this, caused by my deppression drugs.

I'm sick of this disease. the sinking feeling in my chest. the twisting feelings in my chest. the incessant crying, not knowing what I'm crying about, the constant tug of war with my therapist. the drugs... and now the psychogenic- full body uncontrolled tremors, nausea, gastric, migraines, urinary retention, constipation, fatigue, lethargy, total loss of self confidence, and having to pick myself up, having to figure out how to make ends meet......I want to give up. I want to give one last goodbye. I want to die...

  • by Black Blood 16
  • 8 months ago

Don't give up Elizabeth! Keep on living for the sake of seeing each new sunrise, watching every star fill the sky with brilliance! Be the star to fill the world with your light! I know you don't know me, but for the sake of people who DO know you, please don't give up!

  • by Patricia Stephmore
  • 1 year ago

Hey, Elizabeth..... I understand how you feel and though I am no one to ask this of you.....but please do not give up.....hold on.......good things come by.........but again I am a total stranger ...just a humble request.

  • by Helen Downey, North Carolina
  • 2 years ago

This touched me. I had depression too, legal drugs helped. Prayer and friends helped too. Thanks for letting me share this. Good luck.

  • by Skylar, Us
  • 2 years ago

This reminds me so much of my own life. What I go through everyday. How I feel. But you were the one that put it in words. You know what it's like to be me. You know. Exactly how it is. How hard it can be. I want to give up so bad, I know I'm not the one that needs to change, not on my own and not all alone. It's sad knowing that people do believe that we can change, when in reality we can not. We can not control these feelings not on our own. If only people weren't so blinded...

  • by Kadisha Alexander
  • 8 months ago

People who are not in our shoes will judge us according to their beliefs. It's is a sad reality. If only these people were in our shoes they would not say the same thing. They will have a different perspective on life.

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