21. I Don't Want Any Other
Our life has not been easy.
We've managed to drift apart.
But whatever it's worth,
Our life has not been easy.
We've managed to drift apart.
But whatever it's worth,
I have faced the same problems, and at times losing hope and waking up to a wet pillow full of tears. I love this poem because it gives me hope for another relationship with my mother. Thank you.
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My father gave her to me, as a gift from God above,
Who would know a step-mother,
is someone you can really love?
I shall call her mother,
I am a new step mom (I hate that word) to a 15 month babygirl. She was conceived when my fiance and I took a break. I forgave him and was so excited about the new baby. The mother was young...
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I feel so much hurt
I feel so much pain
I feel like I don't have anyone
I feel like I want to cry but can't
I felt every single word of this poem me and my birth Mum are not close it's a bit hard for me knowing that your birth Mum wants nothing to do with you or she doesn't love you at all. The...
When I held you for the first time,
My life began to shine.
I knew then this life wasn't just mine.
I'm so glad to hear that one of my poems has touched others. My little girl is now almost 14 and we have face many challenges but she continues to be my little girl.
Thank you all for...
My angel is a woman who walks upon the earth,
she shows me my potential and all that I am worth.
When I am sick she heals me and makes me feel all-better,
and makes sure that in times of need that we are all together.
You are my hero.
The most influential person in my life.
You are loved by us all.
A mother, sister, daughter, and a wife.
My mother and I are the best of friends. We confide in each other, and we talk about everything. We tell each other how much we love each other every single day.
When I'm down and feeling blue
And the world is over me
I feel so helpless and down
So worried and unbound
Analysis of Form and Technique
The one who brought me down to earth
And held me every day.
The one who gracefully gave me birth
And said, I love you in every way.
Very good usage of words. Rhyming pattern is good and the structure rocks. One of the best I've read so far. Keep on writing more!
They never knew the hurt inside,
I always tried to smile with pride,
They don't know how I really feel,
I never try to talk and heal,
I'm thankful for my mother
for always standing by my side.
For letting me cry on her shoulder,
and for being my greatest guide.
I was asked to write a poem
About Mother's Day
But when I sat down to write
I had nothing to say
Beautiful, heart-felt, and extremely touching. I feel you, Roxanna. Bless you for keeping it real. I can relate. Keep writing!
You made everything so perfect, a childhood truly blessed,
Our hair combed nice and neatly and our clothes pristinely pressed,
Every meal on the table - breakfast, lunch and tea,
How did you ever do it all while still making time for me?
As I sit and blow this bubble,
I fondly think of you.
Of all the things you taught me
I was on here looking for a Mother's Day poem that I could make into art for my mom. There are a lot of lovely pieces on here, but this one... this one made me cry. It's perfect because it...
Mama with her babies in her rocking chair, she sings
The soothing sound of lullabies,
Her voice so sweetly rings.
Singing in her rocking chair,
You are all grown up as anyone can see.
A beautiful lady standing in front of me.
Spreading your wings and leaving the nest,
to see what's out there for you at best.
She is my mother,
that indomitable, unattainable goal.
A woman of iron and silk and unforgiving praise.
She is the measure of all that
Very familiar attitude from that daughter. I would be willing to bet everything I own that the mother sees herself in a totally different light.
You've been there since I was young,
You've healed my cuts and pains.
You guided me through my sorrows
And helped celebrate my gains.
My darling daughter,
I just want you to know
wherever your life takes you,
my heart shall also go.
My beautiful daughter is getting married today, and I must share her now with the man she has chosen. This poem just says it all for me it is lovely, and so heartfelt I am going to share it...
I came to this world nothing.
I thank you, Mama, for taking care of me.
I am so weak and can't stand alone.
Thank you, Mama, for helping me stand on my own.
You have always been there for me,
Teaching me about life's ways
Around you
There is never a dull day.
That poem reminded me of my mommy and I. My mommy was diagnosed with diabetes type one, and also M.S. and even though I know she tries her hardest and fails, I still love her, but sometimes I...