STOP Teen Suicide Poem

I write almost every chance I get. I write all types of literature ranging from poems and short stories to several novels. I also am an art student. Final Place was inspired when I was doing a lot of research because my school did not offer anything on suicide prevention. I had many years of experience with this topic, from own problems and from those who were around me. I survived, and I can say that I am glad to be alive. Life is not easy..but neither is dying.

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It was beautifully written and made me very sad. My brother committed suicide. I have decided .... life is the positivity that we make it and to LEAVE ALL ALONE whom do not serve us...

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Final Place

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Published: January 2013

In a dark place, with a sad face,
Soaked by rain, there she lay slain.

A mother cried out,
And looked into the sky,
She had no chance, No last goodbye.

A misunderstanding, a fight,
Took the life of this girl,
Blood pours out from her wrists.

She lays in the grave,
That should have never been made,
With no second chance,
She has danced the last dance.

The coffin closes, Covered by roses,
A head stone placed,
An angels crying face.

Eulogy said, The day is dead,
The battle lost, With her the cost.

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  • Tracey Easter by Tracey Easter
  • 7 years ago

It was beautifully written and made me very sad. My brother committed suicide. I have decided .... life is the positivity that we make it and to LEAVE ALL ALONE whom do not serve us well

True Love is everywhere.... and where WE least expect it.

Love from Tahoe CA

  • Gillian Tomlinson by Gillian Tomlinson, California
  • 7 years ago

I always wonder if my parents would care if I committed suicide..... Probably not. :'(

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