21. The Promise
I love you.
Those three words didn't mean a thing.
I thought we were meant to be,
But I guess it was just a fling.
I love you.
Those three words didn't mean a thing.
I thought we were meant to be,
But I guess it was just a fling.
This poem meant a lot to me. This is my first real heartbreak. It really does hurt when a relationship comes to an end. The good thing is that this is a learning experience that can help us...
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He's gone,
Like a shadow when the sun goes down.
The magic fades when he turns around.
Great descriptors that paint a picture for the reader. Looking forward to read more from you!
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I can see the pain in your eyes,
it's right there,
reminding me of what I've done.
I am the betrayer,
This poem really spoke to me. Having been on both sides of the terrible plague that is cheating, this poem opened my eyes to what I have done and how much pain cheating can cause. I can't...
I am lying awake in my nice, warm bed.
I am not sleeping because you are stuck in my head.
I try to forget that you were ever here,
But you made a huge impact in that one short year.
Wonderful poetry Taeha, your despair shows through every word you've shared. I hope one day your friend shows up, with a big, warm, consoling hug.
Today as I went home,
even if I'm with my friends, I feel so alone.
Thinking of you made me feel so blue,
for you love her, and I'm in love with you.
This poem hit so hard that I was in tears by the end of it because it hurts so much. I'm in love with my ex, and we dated 2 and a half years ago when we were really dumb and immature. We...
My love to her is a roaring fire.
She's all I ever did or will desire.
Without her I am no more,
'Cause she's all I live for.
In my experience, a boy with the courage to put it all out there for all to see is not only rare, it's inspiring! I am so proud that the author took this step. He has set an amazing example....
The first snow of the year falls around me.
I stare out my window. It never fails to astound me
How each flake is different. None are the same.
You're welcome. It's really sad when someone dear becomes a stranger in two minutes. It's a nice poem that was greatly expressed.
You came to me when you were sad
And I was stupid to take you back
I thought you could change
But I was wrong and I'm filled with pain
I gave you happiness
You accepted it
I offered you care
You embraced it
Exactly what has happened to me. He accepted me but never gave anything back in return. I think of him everyday but, he has always has been thinking about my other friend. I hadn't known and...
OMG. This poem resonates with me. My ex was my best guy friend, and then he broke up with me and straight away he started dating another girl. When she broke his heart by cheating on him, he...
I feel so empty; all colors are dull.
I can barely breathe on my own.
The light is gone and dark is back.
Cover me in endless black,
I enjoyed the poem "Since You Left." The poet spoke her heart out.
If I could tell you I would,
But I don't think I ever could.
Falling or not, it's hard to tell.
I didn't realize how far I actually fell.
This is the exact situation I am currently in. This girl is so amazing, but I can't tell her how I feel because I'm afraid it will ruin the friendship we have.
I told you how I felt,
But you turned the other cheek.
I was basically rejected.
I feel so small, so very weak.
I met him this year while I was in the process of leaving an abusive relationship. We met on a dating app and became besties. We told each other everything. Long story short, he lied to me...
Every day is the same old thing.
Seeing you with her makes my heart sting.
The way your eyes look at her with desire,
I feel as though my whole world is on fire.
I was in high school when a guy joined our school. I was only attracted at first but loved him later. He made me smile when I forgot to smile. He was my hope and strength. We were friends for...
You came into my life
During a time I was hurt.
All you said
Was that he was a jerk.
I can relate to your poem. I had a similar experience with a boy I liked in school. It was the first time I felt that intense feeling that comes with love. I was shy to talk to him, and when...
He said he didn't want to hurt me,
So why do I feel this pain?
The rusty knife in my heart
Lets the deep wounds bleed.
Healing from heartbreak
is something one rarely does
from the moment of that day
even if it's just because
I lie awake on my bed and think of you.
Oh, how I wish you had a clue.
I think of the times we spent together.
I wish those memories would last forever.
I remember when there was a spark,
When we would meet secretly in the park
Oh, how we kissed
How much you will be missed
At first, love is always sweet, and when it becomes sour, our hearts are always divided in pieces like a broken mirror. We all go through this phase, and I'm glad you could pen our feelings...
Funny when things never change
Even when you say they will
But while you're off seeing her
My life is standing still
By reading this poem I realized that I am not the only one who feels used by a boy. I've been feeling so bad lately and I feel like dying. Even my best friend betrays me. I had no feeling of...