1. Forever And Always
You are the sun that shines brightly throughout my day.
You are the gravity that holds me down in every way.
You are the moon that shimmers throughout my night.
You are stars that glimmer oh so bright.
Published: March 2020
Heart felt
You are the sun that shines brightly throughout my day.
You are the gravity that holds me down in every way.
You are the moon that shimmers throughout my night.
You are stars that glimmer oh so bright.
We’re young right now. We don’t know what’s wrong and what’s right exactly, but there’s this beautiful feeling that’s inside. It keeps us going. We may be too young to fall in love, but is it...
Analysis of Form and Technique
The sparkle in your eye,
The warmth of your skin,
Your breath on my neck
That shakes me within.
This is a lovely poem. Choicest words, correct rhymes, tender but intense feelings. The writer not only wrote but also lived his emotions. What a grand way to introduce the beloved. Very...
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I awake each morning to start a new day,
But the pain of losing you never goes away.
I go about the things I have to do,
And as the hours pass, I think again of you.
I can relate. I lost my mom this year in May 2020. We spent 15 wonderful years together. I see and walk by her room every day, and the "whys" come on, trying to navigate this life without...
When I first met you,
I felt like I had known you forever,
telling you my secrets
and what I didn't want ever.
I had been dating a man for a few months and he always had a wall up. I sent him this poem after a very deep conversation. His response was WOW. I asked of course, "Good wow or bad? Did I...
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I have given all my love to you, but what do I get in return?
A broken heart.
I have given you my heart, and you stomp on it like a doormat.
I have given you my youth and you took advantage of my un-experienced heart and played with my emotions.
Brenda, I know exactly how you feel. I'm in love with a guy who doesn't feel the same about me. He says he loves me but really doesn't show it much. He has never been abusive or physically...
Feelings to love someone and being loved by someone you love are really great. The poem traveled me through those days when me and my boyfriend had a romantic time and had a crush on each...
You keep running from the truth; you know it's true.
You think I am crazy for loving you.
I wish you could see the angel I see
This poem is one of its own. It's a true reflection of reality out here. It takes me back to the years I thought I found him when I had not. Relationships didn't last long until I found him....
I thought of you today, but that's nothing new.
I thought about you yesterday and the day before that too.
For every day, good or bad, you'll always be in my head.
I hope you've understood everything I've said.
Thank you for those encouraging words. I haven’t even met the man I’m with face to face yet. But I honestly can’t help but know and feel in my heart that he is my forever love. We communicate...
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