Last Chance
Analysis of Form and Technique
My heart aches, Dad,
For the things you won't do.
My soul breaks, Dad,
For all that we've been through.
Published: June 2018
Some father-child relationships are strained or tense. Wounds exist that create frustration, anger, and distance.
Analysis of Form and Technique
My heart aches, Dad,
For the things you won't do.
My soul breaks, Dad,
For all that we've been through.
My dad is a substance abuser. He is abusive physically, emotionally and mentally in every possible way imagine. Since I could remember he has degraded my mum, my brothers and me. My mum...
You broke my trust for you
Just as you broke your promises.
You broke my love for you
Just as you can break a twig.
I can relate. My Dad is an alcoholic and he has crushed my heart. He has broken me beyond repair.
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I wonder what it's like
to not put up a fight
with someone you're supposed to love so dearly
and get some sleep at night.
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We trusted you with all our hearts,
Just to find that you didn't care.
No more lies, no more cries.
It's all over; there's no more time.
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I'm sorry you missed the day I came home.
I'm sorry you left my Mum all alone.
I'm sorry you missed the first time I walked.
And I'm sorry you missed the first time I talked.
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Photographs of you holding me in your arms,
You protected me from any kind of harm,
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I was always your number one rock star....
where were you when I was all alone
why weren't you here after I begged you to come home
how could you leave me here by myself, you were all I had
I had enough people to hurt me...
I wish I had a normal father just like my friends. A loving and caring support. Dad, you've done so much damage to me. It might not be visible to you since the scars you left are internal,...
How long has it been since you wrapped me
in those strong and tough arms of yours?
How long are you gonna wait
to tell me that you are proud of me?...
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